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No stanza
There´s no point for this stanza...
No point in this endless stanza!
The verse is not diverse at all...
All verse is a journey into the void.
This stanza is drowning in verses.
Reverse the phrase to any other surface...
Rewrite the words to make a point.
Comment in a blank bellow!
Embrace the meaning of oblivion...
Trace the horizons of a composition!
Compose the disposals to a underwrite.
Unwrite everyword you've ever wrote!
Every compositition every single note!
There's no point in any simple stanza...
PAR
Published 25th Feb 2023
Author's Note
Interlacing the readings of Neruda and Kaváfis...
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25th Feb 2023 2:52pm
hello Par what if you're rewriting the same pains
on someone else's blank page
I don't know I think it should be kept to yourself maybe...
anyway that's what your poem made me think of...
great write
on someone else's blank page
I don't know I think it should be kept to yourself maybe...
anyway that's what your poem made me think of...
great write
25th Feb 2023 3:19pm
26th Feb 2023 4:02am
Oblivion is sometimes my favorite word, it stares with a face that is ungod and where rust creeps like vines from wherever entropy was born.
I love the almost Nietzsche fervor with which you throw your heart at the page, is the impression I get.
I love the almost Nietzsche fervor with which you throw your heart at the page, is the impression I get.
26th Feb 2023 11:27am
