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This poem is called In this World... There is So Much...Bad...
So Much Wrong...
So Much..... Unfair....
....
BUT...
...
there is also....
SO MUCH....LOVE......
.....
.....from Jesus......
..........
Yes when I feel.....
.....the Cold Wind of this World.....
.....I Stop...
Look up....
and I feel....The Warm Love of Jesus...
.....
.....Loving Me.... :)
So Much..... Unfair....
....
BUT...
...
there is also....
SO MUCH....LOVE......
.....
.....from Jesus......
..........
Yes when I feel.....
.....the Cold Wind of this World.....
.....I Stop...
Look up....
and I feel....The Warm Love of Jesus...
.....
.....Loving Me.... :)
Published 19th Feb 2023
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Anonymous
19th Feb 2023 8:02pm
I feel HIS love everyday. This is a great tribute to our Savior.
7th Mar 2023 7:13pm
23rd Mar 2024 5:28pm
This poem evokes a powerful juxtaposition between the darkness and negativity present in the world and the overwhelming love and warmth offered by Jesus. The repetition of phrases like "So Much Bad... So Much Wrong... So Much Unfair..." effectively emphasizes the weight of these challenges. However, the shift in tone with the introduction of Jesus's love brings a sense of hope and comfort.
The imagery of feeling the "Cold Wind of this World" but then stopping to look up and feel the "Warm Love of Jesus" is particularly evocative. It speaks to the personal experience of finding solace and reassurance in faith during difficult times.
Overall, the poem captures a poignant message about the enduring presence of love amidst the hardships of life, offering readers a glimpse of light in the midst of darkness.
The imagery of feeling the "Cold Wind of this World" but then stopping to look up and feel the "Warm Love of Jesus" is particularly evocative. It speaks to the personal experience of finding solace and reassurance in faith during difficult times.
Overall, the poem captures a poignant message about the enduring presence of love amidst the hardships of life, offering readers a glimpse of light in the midst of darkness.
