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Eight-Infinity
a circle
an 8 lying down
the 1 standing
an infinity
still
the dew drops
into the pool
incessantly
every dawn
Still
thoughts circling
like a steroid fed
gerbil
in my brain
still
18
spell pain
a D-anniversary
and an anniversary.
an 8 lying down
the 1 standing
an infinity
still
the dew drops
into the pool
incessantly
every dawn
Still
thoughts circling
like a steroid fed
gerbil
in my brain
still
18
spell pain
a D-anniversary
and an anniversary.
Published 18th Feb 2023
Author's Note
Thoughts on a rainy day
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18th Feb 2023 5:21pm
The process is indeed, lifelong.... you've penned those thoughts so poetically grand, dear lady.
Really excellently done.
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Really excellently done.
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18th Feb 2023 11:23pm
19th Feb 2023 2:44am
19th Feb 2023 7:31am
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11th Mar 2023 10:03am
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16th Mar 2023 00:47am
Your summarising of the poem is very in-depth and I must say intense in a way that encourages poets to thrive and do more so their poems are read as they are meant to be, to be understood in such a way that it reads the poet's message, or almost. Critics don't have to be critical to evaluate a poem, they don't have to tear it apart, or dissect it to get at the true meaning for the meaning and the message will always rest on the original writer. Nor do they have to dissect the poem for grammar for its the back and forth of lights on words that make a poem. All in its creator's imagery.
Thank you so much MrBlack for the kind feedback and your thorough thought on the simple write.
Thank you so much MrBlack for the kind feedback and your thorough thought on the simple write.
