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Lonely
He likes her,
She likes him,
They get together,
They're more than friends.
I'm all alone,
in the corner of the room,
wonderin' how she got you,
when I couldn't do that too.
Maybe I'm just imperfect and ugly,
or just not cute enough.
Maybe I cut too much,
Or am too rough.
But in the end, I'm still alone
alone.
Over in this corner of the room on my own
own.
Can I expect anybody to pick up the shards?
Of who I used to be, I mean?
Not really, I guess, because there's a lot
and I'm not what I really seem.
But still I can feel lonely, can't I?
I can feel a little upset.
Because I can feel bitter as they all giggle together,
when I'm alone in the end.
I look in the mirror and all I see are flaws
in my skin, cracks in who I am.
I don't even want to face this anymore,
I don't want to make myself understand.
I'll just keep hiding away, lonely as usual,
I'll never reach out to another, take that risk? Never.
And I'll just keep existing, lonely, lonely.
I'll just keeping existing like this forever.
She likes him,
They get together,
They're more than friends.
I'm all alone,
in the corner of the room,
wonderin' how she got you,
when I couldn't do that too.
Maybe I'm just imperfect and ugly,
or just not cute enough.
Maybe I cut too much,
Or am too rough.
But in the end, I'm still alone
alone.
Over in this corner of the room on my own
own.
Can I expect anybody to pick up the shards?
Of who I used to be, I mean?
Not really, I guess, because there's a lot
and I'm not what I really seem.
But still I can feel lonely, can't I?
I can feel a little upset.
Because I can feel bitter as they all giggle together,
when I'm alone in the end.
I look in the mirror and all I see are flaws
in my skin, cracks in who I am.
I don't even want to face this anymore,
I don't want to make myself understand.
I'll just keep hiding away, lonely as usual,
I'll never reach out to another, take that risk? Never.
And I'll just keep existing, lonely, lonely.
I'll just keeping existing like this forever.
Published 7th Apr 2012
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7th Apr 2012 6:09pm
8th Apr 2012 7:23am
7th Apr 2012 6:11pm
I really loved this poem..It was very deep.. you captured my heart with this! XD very well written!
8th Apr 2012 7:24am
7th Apr 2012 7:50pm
8th Apr 2012 7:24am
8th Apr 2012 00:52am
Life it to short to not take chances. I used to be like that, always wondering why, if there was something wrong with me, why I was overlooked, and truth is for me, I intimidate people because I'm smart and complicated (don't mean that is a pretentious way). There is nothing wrong with me, and there is nothing wrong with you.
Loneliness is part of what it is to be human, everyone gets lonely, and if someone says they don't then they're lying. Loneliness doesn't last forever (it just feels like it will)... but if you lock yourself away and never give anyone the chance to know you, the loneliness get worse. Life and love happen when we least expect it... promise...it can just take a while.
Loneliness is part of what it is to be human, everyone gets lonely, and if someone says they don't then they're lying. Loneliness doesn't last forever (it just feels like it will)... but if you lock yourself away and never give anyone the chance to know you, the loneliness get worse. Life and love happen when we least expect it... promise...it can just take a while.
8th Apr 2012 7:26am
Thank you so much for the advice Indie, I hate whenever I feel Lonely. It always feels like it will last forever, and I always feel so jealous of my friends who DON'T deserve boyfriends and good guys because they cheat and such when I am being overlooked, it's like I am flailing in a corner begging to be seen by someone worthwhile, ya know?
Thanks for the feedback. (:
Thanks for the feedback. (:
Sweety, if they don't notice you then they aren't worthwhile. I've wondered the same thing about some of my friends that are quite shallow, when I've been overlooked. If guys/girls are chasing guys/girls like that, what does that say about them?
Other times I've caught someones attention and really wish I hadn't. So far there has only been one person that was worth catching the attention of, and it didn't last, but it was still worth it. :)
Other times I've caught someones attention and really wish I hadn't. So far there has only been one person that was worth catching the attention of, and it didn't last, but it was still worth it. :)
8th Apr 2012 8:02am
Yeah, I s'pose, s'just been awhile since I've had attention from someone and I miss it. xD
Thanks hun. <3
Thanks hun. <3
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