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Editing on Occasion
Editing in Occasion
Texting is
a curious,
furious thing
that I
seldom do
attend to,
and so it is
I hardly try
to edit/mend
or make new.
I let the words
just fall
as they may
and let mistakes
and omits stay,
because they're read
much more
than subjects
are often
gone through.
Texting is
a curious,
furious thing
that I
seldom do
attend to,
and so it is
I hardly try
to edit/mend
or make new.
I let the words
just fall
as they may
and let mistakes
and omits stay,
because they're read
much more
than subjects
are often
gone through.
Published 11th Feb 2023
Author's Note
I find it ironic that people are often more likely to complain about how their lovers lack skill than they are to educate them on just how they like to be pleased.
My olfactory senses were all but destroyed by an incompetent doctor, who left me with only the ability to smell hormones, and so going down town is my Achilles heel.
My olfactory senses were all but destroyed by an incompetent doctor, who left me with only the ability to smell hormones, and so going down town is my Achilles heel.
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12th Feb 2023 11:50am
Its a learning process, RT. Some people gets it at 'go' :) words are just words until they're made beautiful.
12th Feb 2023 7:36pm
14th Feb 2023 10:58am
