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My Superior
You're starving baby
It's killing the mother in me
I wanna feed you
Wanna give you
Everything that you need
You fix this house
Watch my moves
You want me
Papi
Like I need you
A man who doesnt speak
Doesn't front
But
What you say youll do
You always come up
There is no empty
There is no doubt
When you say
Baby
I'll figure it out
A silent killer
Not to say a word
Your actions speak
No
They conquer my world
The conversations
Are silent with us
A look in your eyes
There's no need to discuss
All thats left is your touch
But I can't want it so much
Cause baby
You'd own me
If you don't already
I'm the diamond that's not so tough.
It's killing the mother in me
I wanna feed you
Wanna give you
Everything that you need
You fix this house
Watch my moves
You want me
Papi
Like I need you
A man who doesnt speak
Doesn't front
But
What you say youll do
You always come up
There is no empty
There is no doubt
When you say
Baby
I'll figure it out
A silent killer
Not to say a word
Your actions speak
No
They conquer my world
The conversations
Are silent with us
A look in your eyes
There's no need to discuss
All thats left is your touch
But I can't want it so much
Cause baby
You'd own me
If you don't already
I'm the diamond that's not so tough.
Published 2nd Feb 2023
Author's Note
When your owned without consent -_-
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2nd Feb 2023 5:06am
Hi, Jenny
This intensely romantic piece is so beautifully written. Oh to be the individual whose word is impeccable, promises always fulfilled. This is the passage that touched me most,
"There is no empty
There is no doubt
When you say
Baby
I'll figure it out"
Bravissima!
This intensely romantic piece is so beautifully written. Oh to be the individual whose word is impeccable, promises always fulfilled. This is the passage that touched me most,
"There is no empty
There is no doubt
When you say
Baby
I'll figure it out"
Bravissima!
4th Feb 2023 2:42pm
It's safety incarnate. Why he's so dangerous :) thank you, poetess, for your encouraging words
6th Feb 2023 4:19am
Ha ha...poet actually. I'm not the goddess but a mere worshipper of goddesses 😁
7th Feb 2023 00:58am
Goddesses are often overlooked as mere worshipers. Being born the bringer of life negates the sentiment that mere observance gives to lesser Men. I do believe, then, as a woman, you are a God simply for the perpetuating force that exists within your womb, our womb,alone. You are not just an observer, love, neither is any who deigns to claim they are woman. You may find the goddesses we seek suffered the same humiliations as we.
2nd Feb 2023 3:34pm
I really love seeing your poems appear in my updates. I missed you and your uniquely wonderful skill. I can't thank you enough for bringing it back and sticking around a bit.... I deeply enjoy your voice here.
Lovely work and even lovelier to see you 🦋
🌹💙 💙
Lovely work and even lovelier to see you 🦋
🌹💙 💙
4th Feb 2023 2:43pm
Thank you, blue. It's an honest poem that came effortlessly in a time of despair and hope.
