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Bankrupt
Standing with the power over
As if irritation would emote to cover
I cannot hold myself above
I feel my stomach sink in love
I hate that I can't save anything
My heart beats in terminal spring
Leave myself behind my mind
I never know what you'll find
I'm falling out of work
My mind is hurting torque
I don't want to force my hand
But I don't know if I can
I feel blind in my mind forever
Eyes of black hide to tether
Passing fate and life unjust
Nothing I write clears the lust
I'm falling further into myself
Still just dreaming of my death
Will I ever do enough
Can I fill my house with stuff
As if irritation would emote to cover
I cannot hold myself above
I feel my stomach sink in love
I hate that I can't save anything
My heart beats in terminal spring
Leave myself behind my mind
I never know what you'll find
I'm falling out of work
My mind is hurting torque
I don't want to force my hand
But I don't know if I can
I feel blind in my mind forever
Eyes of black hide to tether
Passing fate and life unjust
Nothing I write clears the lust
I'm falling further into myself
Still just dreaming of my death
Will I ever do enough
Can I fill my house with stuff
Published 31st Jan 2023
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5th May 2023 1:54am
This seems almost like a hopeless struggle. Surviving in the world isn't easy, and it's often unfair. Life is difficult at times, and so often, we get lost in the other side of the coin. Human nature has an affinity, a proclivity, an inclination to succumb to sin and darkness. It's one of our main ways of channeling something relatable. That being said, there is something to build off of here. Anyway, thank you for sharing. I enjoyed the read.
