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I feel my flesh is made of
loud screams of god
and His tantrums,
His dumb ideas
are the lighthouses that
take me away from the coast,
I really am a boat
adrift and snoring in the
belly, and I smell like
a sludge of coffee from
God, but made out of His
mud is what I'm not...
PAR
loud screams of god
and His tantrums,
His dumb ideas
are the lighthouses that
take me away from the coast,
I really am a boat
adrift and snoring in the
belly, and I smell like
a sludge of coffee from
God, but made out of His
mud is what I'm not...
PAR
Published 28th Jan 2023
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Really liking this, PAR. Some may be offended by your (gasp) images but I find them audacious and delicious. Bravo.
Also love the artwork.
Also love the artwork.
28th Jan 2023 10:52pm
28th Jan 2023 11:41pm
28th Jan 2023 11:59pm
29th Jan 2023 1:05am
This is great! I like the idea of bringing God down a few notches, as in He is probably just messing around with us sometimes. Your write brings a really awesome approach to that idea.
Good stuff, PAR.
Good stuff, PAR.
29th Jan 2023 8:58am
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29th Jan 2023 10:00am
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29th Jan 2023 10:37am
29th Jan 2023 2:12pm
Your poem is wonderful but your drawing stole the show for me. You’re a very talented artist all around
29th Jan 2023 2:48pm
