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Aside
There is a side,
To life.
A side from which, I tend to shy.
I love the dark,
So meaning doesn't fit.
From the dark,
I find light.
Find,
A way to fight.
But that side,
That side,
That's held in sorrow and in pain.
Has few words,
And fewer yet,
To say.
To life.
A side from which, I tend to shy.
I love the dark,
So meaning doesn't fit.
From the dark,
I find light.
Find,
A way to fight.
But that side,
That side,
That's held in sorrow and in pain.
Has few words,
And fewer yet,
To say.
Published 18th Jan 2023
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19th Jan 2023 3:20am
Dear F,
So true your closing lines. The older I get the less I want to put words to things, especially pain and sorrow. Tuck them away and turn towards the light. There is a calm, quiet speech in this piece I really admire. H🌷
So true your closing lines. The older I get the less I want to put words to things, especially pain and sorrow. Tuck them away and turn towards the light. There is a calm, quiet speech in this piece I really admire. H🌷
19th Jan 2023 10:08am
Dear H,
I think to turn them and surround them in light is all we can do.
Appreciated and as always, thank you.
F
I think to turn them and surround them in light is all we can do.
Appreciated and as always, thank you.
F
19th Jan 2023 5:48am
I feel like this holds a deep truth, while remaining proportional and calmly contemplative, the succinct focus of it lends a gravity that is impacting.
19th Jan 2023 10:18am
It is and needs all of what you've felt, or it's impact the weight of its gravity collapsing upon its self would be, overwhelming..
Thank you Daniel.
Thank you Daniel.
17th Apr 2023 10:26pm
