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Alone
Alone,
All I find is the tree.
It's bowl, it's branch,
It's,
regeneration.
The energy at its root,
Rising in a steady flow of fire.
Amassing in vast,
Liberating endurance.
And then,
And then,
Awoken,
So fully,
So truly.
It stands, recalled,
It stands replete.
This lone tree,
Is, the forest spanning past,
Set, in present site.
This lone tree,
stands here complete.
All one,
With careful meaning and action,
Found.
The ground,
Touched with gentle elation,
Whispers,
Whispers songs,
Of hymns,
Sung,
Eternal.
All I find is the tree.
It's bowl, it's branch,
It's,
regeneration.
The energy at its root,
Rising in a steady flow of fire.
Amassing in vast,
Liberating endurance.
And then,
And then,
Awoken,
So fully,
So truly.
It stands, recalled,
It stands replete.
This lone tree,
Is, the forest spanning past,
Set, in present site.
This lone tree,
stands here complete.
All one,
With careful meaning and action,
Found.
The ground,
Touched with gentle elation,
Whispers,
Whispers songs,
Of hymns,
Sung,
Eternal.
Published 17th Jan 2023
Author's Note
First draft or perhaps the final.. either way a story far from over.
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18th Jan 2023 00:43am
“It's,
regeneration.
The energy at its root,
Rising in a steady flow of fire.
Amassing in vast,
Liberating endurance.
And then,
And then,
Awoken,
So fully,
So truly.
It stands, recalled,
It stands replete.”
Oh, to strive for this level of becoming. This was just a joy to read; I heard the orchestra play along, building itself to the crescendo of the arrival at wholeness. And then, and then…just the quiet of your words descending into whisper.
Beautifully resonant voice throughout, the emotion is exquisitely laid bare. The connection to rebirth, regrowth, resilience of the tree is really lovely.
Really loved this one.
regeneration.
The energy at its root,
Rising in a steady flow of fire.
Amassing in vast,
Liberating endurance.
And then,
And then,
Awoken,
So fully,
So truly.
It stands, recalled,
It stands replete.”
Oh, to strive for this level of becoming. This was just a joy to read; I heard the orchestra play along, building itself to the crescendo of the arrival at wholeness. And then, and then…just the quiet of your words descending into whisper.
Beautifully resonant voice throughout, the emotion is exquisitely laid bare. The connection to rebirth, regrowth, resilience of the tree is really lovely.
Really loved this one.
19th Jan 2023 10:01am
I can hear your joy Luna, infectious in the smile you've raised. Not sure my current audio skills would do your vision justice though...
Thank you for stopping, reading, commenting always a joy to find.
Thank you for stopping, reading, commenting always a joy to find.
18th Jan 2023 7:16am
Dear F,
Resplendent. For me, in poetic format you’ve created a movie short for the minds eye. A vivid and detailed accounting of the beauty of nature and its ability to rise above, grow and/or regrow no matter the circumstance, I really enjoyed your lovely write.
H🌷
Resplendent. For me, in poetic format you’ve created a movie short for the minds eye. A vivid and detailed accounting of the beauty of nature and its ability to rise above, grow and/or regrow no matter the circumstance, I really enjoyed your lovely write.
H🌷
19th Jan 2023 10:04am
Dearest H,
To keep on growing to keep on going no matter what is such a grounding, such a strength of nature.
Thank you as always,
F.
To keep on growing to keep on going no matter what is such a grounding, such a strength of nature.
Thank you as always,
F.
