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Self-coloured
Prolific in instance;
Unvarnished
Destined
Bide the night temptress;
Athirst
Clandestine
She claws at you…
Sentient
Humming
Come tickle my wrists…
Jaded
Coming
The blood trickles down…
Persuaded
Numbing
Drip, drip…
Faded strumming
Slow dance;
Essence stealing
Narrow mind;
Absent
Reeling
Track that
Elusive feeing
Black spot;
Emptied
Keeling
Unvarnished
Destined
Bide the night temptress;
Athirst
Clandestine
She claws at you…
Sentient
Humming
Come tickle my wrists…
Jaded
Coming
The blood trickles down…
Persuaded
Numbing
Drip, drip…
Faded strumming
Slow dance;
Essence stealing
Narrow mind;
Absent
Reeling
Track that
Elusive feeing
Black spot;
Emptied
Keeling
Published 16th Jan 2023
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16th Jan 2023 10:27pm
The unique perspective here is really engaging and its a raw subject to delve into. It has a pulsing pace and your word choices are great I particularly like athirst and clandestine, the sense of a secret need comes across to me.
16th Jan 2023 11:05pm
I felt the need to deconstruct the poem I sent you. It just didn’t feel right to me. I have more confidence in the piece. Thanks for your input
