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Gaze Into My Fire
Gaze on into my fire.
As blinkless as a gaze can be.
our first moment,
wordless as sleeping lips.
Our souls embraced
but bot our lips.
Glancing at you,
glancing at me.
This was a moment
between our eyes.
And with your eyes,
you've set my soul ablaze.
Was this truly a moment?
Gaze on into my fire.
As you looked away,
my eyes chased you unseen.
As blinkless as a gaze can be.
our first moment,
wordless as sleeping lips.
Our souls embraced
but bot our lips.
Glancing at you,
glancing at me.
This was a moment
between our eyes.
And with your eyes,
you've set my soul ablaze.
Was this truly a moment?
Gaze on into my fire.
As you looked away,
my eyes chased you unseen.
Published 15th Jan 2023
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Anonymous
15th Jan 2023 11:28am
Beautifully penned.. well there are many people over here who never reply to comments... Anyway keep writing...
15th Jan 2023 11:55am
Thanks as always Olivia, I will keep writing for not only myself but for a select others ;) hehe
Anonymous
15th Jan 2023 12:40pm
Very nice... Thanks for reply
16th Jan 2023 9:47pm
23rd Jan 2023 10:33am
25th Jan 2023 3:25pm
A beautiful expression of sharing that moment of passion.
When you look into each others eyes and souls embrace.
That powerful longing to take that feeling even further.
But sometimes we must look away but the longing is still there.
How often do we see a person that truly excites the soul.
When you look into each others eyes and souls embrace.
That powerful longing to take that feeling even further.
But sometimes we must look away but the longing is still there.
How often do we see a person that truly excites the soul.
12th Mar 2023 5:27am
17th May 2024 5:11am
I like your focus on the eyes... they are always the first and most seductive thing you see.
17th May 2024 5:17am
17th May 2024 5:34am
