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speak your words out loud
with trembling voice,
if you must speak at all;
shout formidable subtleties
lest they remain locked within,
never seeing the light of day;
bellow out of turn,
roll over the top of voices
designed to cover your mouth
so that your words never reach
the ears of your intended targets;
sing with all your might,
let your throat carry it all -
your pain, your joy, your laughter -
up to the heavens where
the gods themselves
are compelled to listen
with trembling voice,
if you must speak at all;
shout formidable subtleties
lest they remain locked within,
never seeing the light of day;
bellow out of turn,
roll over the top of voices
designed to cover your mouth
so that your words never reach
the ears of your intended targets;
sing with all your might,
let your throat carry it all -
your pain, your joy, your laughter -
up to the heavens where
the gods themselves
are compelled to listen
Published 11th Jan 2023
| Edited 12th Jan 2023
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11th Jan 2023 9:52pm
Raising my voice to roll over the top of voices designed to silence... that is something I've always struggled with. I like the strength, the confidence that this portrays.. to hear this as a spoken word....
11th Jan 2023 10:33pm
I struggle with speaking up and allowing my truth to be heard, too. I’m working on a recording as we speak, hopefully it will be up tomorrow. Thank you so much for the RL, and for taking the time to comment, it’s always good to see you stop by!
Your welcome and kudos for challenging yourself to facing it voice on! I look forward to it..
Nicely done Luna, well done!
Nicely done Luna, well done!
12th Jan 2023 3:23pm
I find this message very timely for me. Currently I am finding a new voice in prayer. But I like your voice in this one! like and RL for me.
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13th Jan 2023 11:40pm
A really beautiful reading Luna.
I am very bad about keeping things in so it was a very good message to remind me how damaging that can be.
Also, I know how others can cover your mouth and prevent you from speaking as well but anyway,
this is a really powerful message. I really loved hearing it spoken as well.
I am very bad about keeping things in so it was a very good message to remind me how damaging that can be.
Also, I know how others can cover your mouth and prevent you from speaking as well but anyway,
this is a really powerful message. I really loved hearing it spoken as well.
14th Jan 2023 00:02am
It’s something I’m working on, too. It’s always such a pleasure to see you here, thank you so much for your kind words!
14th Jan 2023 5:51pm
Beautifully true declarative I would call it honey but there is no defining the many wonderful dimensions of who you are. I love your branching into audios!
14th Jan 2023 6:35pm
15th Jan 2023 10:23am
This is a beautiful piece and lovely reading. Hope you do find your voice and always speak your truths
Love
NuBorn
Love
NuBorn
15th Jan 2023 11:07am
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2nd Feb 2023 6:42am
Yip, that is formidable poetry, I really enjoyed it, effortless control of the language beast.
2nd Feb 2023 12:17pm
