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I Did Not Want To Disturb You
Rick woke up
and saw Ginger wearing
only one of his dress shirts before
she moved closer and said "I did not want to disturb
you." which made Rick look down and see that
he was as nude as she
was last night.
and saw Ginger wearing
only one of his dress shirts before
she moved closer and said "I did not want to disturb
you." which made Rick look down and see that
he was as nude as she
was last night.
Published 10th Jan 2023
Author's Note
The title of this one triquain poem happens to be what one half of a couple says to the other half who just woke up.
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11th Jan 2023 6:08am
Paints a warm 'morning after' atmosphere. Nice way to be woken, I would feel.
11th Jan 2023 12:20pm
