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Until Mornings
the soothe of a piano filtered thru the atmosphere
as I saw her caressing the stem
of a vintage glass of champagne
our eyes met
a deepness drawing me in
kissing and exploring
each others souls
even tho
we were standing far apart
I felt the pitter patter
of a heart exploding
as her presence
nearly knocked me out
I watched her watching me
her hips gently swaying to the exotic notes
I took one big sip
of her
another, then one more
knowing in the morning
I'd be at loss
for what was in-store
as I saw her caressing the stem
of a vintage glass of champagne
our eyes met
a deepness drawing me in
kissing and exploring
each others souls
even tho
we were standing far apart
I felt the pitter patter
of a heart exploding
as her presence
nearly knocked me out
I watched her watching me
her hips gently swaying to the exotic notes
I took one big sip
of her
another, then one more
knowing in the morning
I'd be at loss
for what was in-store
Published 6th Jan 2023
| Edited 9th Jan 2023
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6th Jan 2023 8:02pm
6th Jan 2023 9:14pm
17th Jan 2023 4:22am
This is pretty awesome Tim!!
Love the feeling when eyes catch each other.
Great write!
Love the feeling when eyes catch each other.
Great write!
17th Jan 2023 5:38pm
18th Jan 2023 4:19pm
Ah, sometimes when eyes meet there are sparks.
You can see the burning passion of the soul,
as it draws you in; kissing and exploring.
And the heart signals your desires exploding.
Watching each other, knowing you must be together.
So take those deep sips and enjoy the exotic notes.
Because when her hips sway against you..
You will wish that morning never comes.
But you will. ;)
You can see the burning passion of the soul,
as it draws you in; kissing and exploring.
And the heart signals your desires exploding.
Watching each other, knowing you must be together.
So take those deep sips and enjoy the exotic notes.
Because when her hips sway against you..
You will wish that morning never comes.
But you will. ;)
20th Jan 2023 1:44am
