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Awakening my dead soul... (with Reading)
Among the garden of graves.
Your blood feeds the need to live.
And the passion only grows.
Waking the dead with your call.
My screams swaying against you.
Petals grasping the fallen.
Not salvation, but you will come.
Each sin feeding my hell.
Made to lie in tainted fields.
Filth seeping from my mind
Into your darkened chambers.
Beating in me to the rhythm.
A Symphony of Sin so deep
This descending staircase leading,
Into mixed insanity for two.
Where innocence died long ago.
But this Garden of Graves is alive.
You are the necromancer.
Calling to me for company.
So that you don't feel dead inside.
Your blood feeds the need to live.
And the passion only grows.
Waking the dead with your call.
My screams swaying against you.
Petals grasping the fallen.
Not salvation, but you will come.
Each sin feeding my hell.
Made to lie in tainted fields.
Filth seeping from my mind
Into your darkened chambers.
Beating in me to the rhythm.
A Symphony of Sin so deep
This descending staircase leading,
Into mixed insanity for two.
Where innocence died long ago.
But this Garden of Graves is alive.
You are the necromancer.
Calling to me for company.
So that you don't feel dead inside.
Author's Note
Video and music royalty free credit to Karl Casey @ White Bat Audio. Thanks Karl. ;)
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Re. Awakening my dead soul... (with Reading)
29th Dec 2022 00:15am
So wonderful
Your voice is like a hypnotist, distinctive and attractive
Professional choice of music and background
Well done
Your voice is like a hypnotist, distinctive and attractive
Professional choice of music and background
Well done
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Re: Re. Awakening my dead soul... (with Reading)
29th Dec 2022 1:47am
I am here to hypnotize you my dear MP. Distinctive and attractive, I love that so much. It's always so awesome to get feedback like this on one of these readings. :) I really appreciate you sharing your thoughts with me. And I am really glad you liked the choice of music and background too. I did as well. I lucked out finding a good video and music combination to use. ;)
Re. Awakening my dead soul... (with Reading)
29th Dec 2022 00:47am
Your style is beautifully unique, and I love the way this piece flows. Your reading was excellently done, as well 💖
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Re: Re. Awakening my dead soul... (with Reading)
29th Dec 2022 1:48am
Hi Luna, it's so great to hear from you. I absolutely adore that you found my style beautifully unique and loved the flow of this one. And I really appreciate your feedback on the reading too. That means so much to me. Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts with me on this one, definitely made me smile. (and you have a beautiful smile btw ;))
Re. Awakening my dead soul... (with Reading)
29th Dec 2022 1:10am
Your themes make me want to read this several times.
Your tainted world somehow acceptable.
Will there be more dates ?
Sin parade
Jaded
I want in
BIG LIKE
Your tainted world somehow acceptable.
Will there be more dates ?
Sin parade
Jaded
I want in
BIG LIKE
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Re: Re. Awakening my dead soul... (with Reading)
29th Dec 2022 1:57am
Haha, well as usual this one has a number of meanings and the themes reflect some of them. lol Although perhaps for some romantic , graveyard, death, and such do not go together. ugh! You know a necromancer is a sorcerer who can communicate and conjure the dead, make zombies, and all that good stuff. So one of those meanings is quite literal. :p But reading several times you might get something different out of each one. There will definitely be more dates (in the graveyard). ;) The sin parade never ends around me, you know that. Love the BIG LIKE.
Re. Awakening my dead soul... (with Reading)
29th Dec 2022 1:12am
Smashed it. Absolutely awesome gorgeous
Dark n sexy just how I like it
Love and light
Ron xx
Dark n sexy just how I like it
Love and light
Ron xx
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Re: Re. Awakening my dead soul... (with Reading)
29th Dec 2022 2:02am
Damn right! I love smashing things damnit. lol And an absolutely awesome is the best. ;) You know Dark n sexy always needs love and light too. Like a black hole, the darkness pulls the light in never allowing it to escape the intense gravity. That's why you like it. I will take all the love and light and definitely give you back some dark n sexy. ;)
Re. Awakening my dead soul... (with Reading)
29th Dec 2022 2:13am
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29th Dec 2022 1:59pm
I am here to hypnotize you Francisco with my words. ;) Perhaps I am the necromancer, conjuring you to do my bidding. Because I always love hearing from you and the encouragement to write. Thanks so much for the wonderful feedback. I love it.
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30th Dec 2022 00:23am
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30th Dec 2022 1:26pm
Re. Awakening my dead soul... (with Reading)
29th Dec 2022 2:38am
"A Symphony of Sin so deep
This descending staircase leading,
Into mixed insanity for two.
Where innocence died long ago"
So beautifully deep and dark.
Wonderful ink, friend 😁
This descending staircase leading,
Into mixed insanity for two.
Where innocence died long ago"
So beautifully deep and dark.
Wonderful ink, friend 😁
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Re: Re. Awakening my dead soul... (with Reading)
29th Dec 2022 2:01pm
I love that you descend this staircase into mixed insanity with me DC. It is dark and descends so deep but I will hold your hand and lead you through the spirals as it takes you down to Hell and back again... I really appreciate the lovely feedback... ;)
Re. Awakening my dead soul... (with Reading)
29th Dec 2022 3:27am
Re: Re. Awakening my dead soul... (with Reading)
29th Dec 2022 2:06pm
Triple win! I really love that you enjoyed the combination of elements with the voice, video/music, and written word. I always hope it will add something extra and be worthwhile doing that. I really appreciate your awesome feedback on it so much. That definitely helps me. :)
Re. Awakening my dead soul... (with Reading)
29th Dec 2022 8:04pm
This is beautiful, even in it's darkness, beautiful. The first verse is explosive.
Regards
James
Regards
James
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Re: Re. Awakening my dead soul... (with Reading)
29th Dec 2022 8:28pm
I am really glad you found it beautiful James. There is beauty in the darkness. The first verse definitely expresses that extreme passion that can grow so strong through suffering. I went through some very bad things but despite that it did ultimately feed my desire to live and the intensity of my passions. Thanks so much for the wonderful comment.
Re: Re. Awakening my dead soul... (with Reading)
30th Dec 2022 5:56pm
I am glad to hear the darkness made you stronger my friend. You have something raw with this one. I commend your desire to live.
Regards
James
Regards
James
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Anonymous
30th Dec 2022 00:28am
Yeah, this dope Kristina. The music was played at the perfect temperature [volume] to
accentuate your voice. This whole vibe had an 80"s feel to it.
Like a cross between Dirty Diana and In The Air tonight.
Damn sexy and nostalgic!
accentuate your voice. This whole vibe had an 80"s feel to it.
Like a cross between Dirty Diana and In The Air tonight.
Damn sexy and nostalgic!
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Re: Re. Awakening my dead soul... (with Reading)
30th Dec 2022 1:25pm
Haha, I love that it's dope Naajir. Thanks so much for letting me know your thoughts on the music temperature. That's very helpful to know. I thought it was a good volume to hear it but not interfere with the reading. I did not realize it had an 80's feel to it, that's great. I love watching things that are set in the 80's like stranger things. And 80's music has so much variety. In The Air Tonight I know but I had to look up Dirty Diana. :p I love that name. Sexy and nostalgic is the best. Love it!
Re. Awakening my dead soul... (with Reading)
30th Dec 2022 2:32am
Got a real desolation feel.
Other side of the tracks.
Vampire calling.
You were born to sin proudly, why fight the inevitable?
Your writing is dank and sexual, wet and sweaty, city sly ..
Love it
Other side of the tracks.
Vampire calling.
You were born to sin proudly, why fight the inevitable?
Your writing is dank and sexual, wet and sweaty, city sly ..
Love it
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Re: Re. Awakening my dead soul... (with Reading)
30th Dec 2022 1:30pm
Nothing like a graveyard to give you that feeling of peaceful desolation. Yes, the other side of the tracks. Ah, it does have a Vampire feel to it as well doesn't it. To be together eternally. Born to sin proudly. lol Yes, that definitely sounds about right. I can't fight it. But is passion really a sin. Or is sin just a calling to feel everything you can. Dank and sexual, wet and sweaty, mmmmm... Absolutely, perfect. And I love city sly. Especially somewhere like London. What an energy there is...
Re. Awakening my dead soul... (with Reading)
30th Dec 2022 4:22am
Dear K,
“Made to lie in tainted fields” out of its context this line caught my eye. As of late this really expresses a particular personal situation. It’s an outstanding read and write. As only you can make come alive. Wildly impressive and in agreement with all the above accolades truly captures your individual stand alone style and grace. H🌷
“Made to lie in tainted fields” out of its context this line caught my eye. As of late this really expresses a particular personal situation. It’s an outstanding read and write. As only you can make come alive. Wildly impressive and in agreement with all the above accolades truly captures your individual stand alone style and grace. H🌷
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Re: Re. Awakening my dead soul... (with Reading)
30th Dec 2022 1:34pm
Sorry to here you have found yourself in a situation like that Honoria. That makes me really sad because you should be laying in the Elysian Fields, not tainted ones. I hope you find yourself in a better situation soon. I do love that you found it outstanding, immersive, and wildly impressive. You take my breath away with your amazing comment and I really don't know what to say. I adore that you think it captures an individual stand alone style and grace. That's such a wonderful thing to say. I am always wishing nothing but the very best for you. X <3
Re. Awakening my dead soul... (with Reading)
KX, your beautiful dark poetry spills are always so mysteriously enchanting and alluring.
I always have found your unique seductive sorcery of ink to be like blood giving life to what was once laying dormant
( if you know what I mean, ''wink'').
It is as if your Black Magic poetry has given a new meaning to a ''Stiff'' one, lol.
Seriously it is as if you have put a spell on me with your sultry voice
and hypnotic arrangement with this brilliant dark romantic poem and reading.
Boy oh boy!
I am surely in need of a psychological autopsy when I can get this aroused by graveyards and death.
Please save some room in your ominous carnal garden for this "Stiff ".
KX your talent is truly bewitching!!!
I always have found your unique seductive sorcery of ink to be like blood giving life to what was once laying dormant
( if you know what I mean, ''wink'').
It is as if your Black Magic poetry has given a new meaning to a ''Stiff'' one, lol.
Seriously it is as if you have put a spell on me with your sultry voice
and hypnotic arrangement with this brilliant dark romantic poem and reading.
Boy oh boy!
I am surely in need of a psychological autopsy when I can get this aroused by graveyards and death.
Please save some room in your ominous carnal garden for this "Stiff ".
KX your talent is truly bewitching!!!
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Re: Re. Awakening my dead soul... (with Reading)
30th Dec 2022 1:36pm
It's so good to see you Feet. (and to know you are still alive too lol). As always, I love your puns and deep comments. I am here to mysteriously enchant and allure you, so stop being a stranger damnit! Seductive sorcery is all about making sure you never lay dormant, that you are always up to the challenge. ;) I know exactly what you mean. lol There are so many ways to use a stiff body and to keep it that way. Black magic edging it's way into your soul. I love putting a spell on you, hypnotizing you. I know I can pull you in with dark romantic poems that speak to you. ;) Have you ready to do my evil bidding. A psychological autopsy. lol I love it. I want to do it. We both need one, I can get aroused by almost anything. lol There is always room my ominous carnal garden for you. ;) Just always be prepared to be stiff and bewitched.
Re. Awakening my dead soul... (with Reading)
31st Dec 2022 11:16am
Not salvation, but you will come.
This line, the way you phrased it kinda made me sit up and take notice. Then we discussed it and you knew that was the line I was referring to before I revealed it. Talk about Black Magic.
You do read my thoughts. There's more to this connection than we even knew, isn't there?
This line, the way you phrased it kinda made me sit up and take notice. Then we discussed it and you knew that was the line I was referring to before I revealed it. Talk about Black Magic.
You do read my thoughts. There's more to this connection than we even knew, isn't there?
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Re: Re. Awakening my dead soul... (with Reading)
31st Dec 2022 1:27pm
Ah yes! there is a reason it is phrased and said that way. Because oh yes, you will definitely come with me. ;) Dead or alive. * cough * Of course I knew, I know everything. lol (I wrote something about that) But yes, black magic of course and I have long been told I can read thoughts. There are so many connections in the universe. It's amazing just how intertwined everything is isn't it? If you just listen and feel...
Re. Awakening my dead soul... (with Reading)
31st Dec 2022 11:19am
Oh BTW the music and creepy feel always add to your aura of handing over one's soul to you. I was born with extra blood so I don't mind that you pin prick me and suck some out occasionally.
I was born to give and you to suck ....
I was born to give and you to suck ....
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Re: Re. Awakening my dead soul... (with Reading)
31st Dec 2022 1:28pm
I love the music, I feel like it really complimented things well. When you hand over your soul there is always a creepy feel to it, like you shouldn't be doing that but... You want to anyway. ;) Extra blood is always a good thing especially when dealing with a vampire who has such intense needs. I do know how to suck out every last drop. :p
Re. Awakening my dead soul... (with Reading)
1st Jan 2023 00:16am
I don't often run into your dark/mysterious side of writings, but I absolutely loved this one. Your voice adds something special too, it gives the reader (listener) that extra thirst for things dark and dreary.
Great work K!
Great work K!
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Re: Re. Awakening my dead soul... (with Reading)
1st Jan 2023 11:23pm
Ah, there is plenty of darkness and mystery within my soul. The darkness claimed me long ago and so it comes out at times. I do adore that you absolutely loved this one. I had that the reading would add something to it. I felt like it did and I really appreciate you giving me your thoughts on that aspect of it as well. Sometimes we definitely thirst for the dark and dreary. The sunshine is just far too bright at times. Thanks so much for the read, listen, and wonderful comment Wally.
Re. Awakening my dead soul... (with Reading)
2nd Jan 2023 2:12am
For someone who doesn't look goth, you're goth! You embrace the darker sense of things like it's comfortable. (?).
I would toss a puppy to you, just to throw you off your game! Lol.
Revel in your darkness, some, but also let the light in at times, too.
Awesome write. You know how to bring the wolves to bay!
I would toss a puppy to you, just to throw you off your game! Lol.
Revel in your darkness, some, but also let the light in at times, too.
Awesome write. You know how to bring the wolves to bay!
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Re: Re. Awakening my dead soul... (with Reading)
2nd Jan 2023 8:57pm
Haha, you know I wrote one called Gothic girl. You don't have to look gothic to be gothic. ;) I do find the darkness more comfortable than the light, the night or a storm or the UK. lol I suppose I have existed much more in the darkness and so I understand it much better. The light is just too bright sometimes. But awww, a puppy, that's adorable. He or she would be so loved. I absolutely love animals so perhaps that is something light after all. Yeah, you might be able to throw me off with puppies and kittens damnit. Not fighting fair that's for sure. So mean... lol
Just in case you wanted to read it, so you don't have to search. :p
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/434699-gothic-girl/
Just in case you wanted to read it, so you don't have to search. :p
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/434699-gothic-girl/
Re. Awakening my dead soul... (with Reading)
8th Jan 2023 11:08pm
👏 👏 👏 👏 👏!! Nice 👌 well displayed your craft is extremely impeccable 👌 please 🙏 keep on writing ✍ ok queen 👸 peace ✌ and blessings always 🙏
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Re: Re. Awakening my dead soul... (with Reading)
9th Jan 2023 00:38am
Absolutely adore that you think my craft is impeccable. You know coming back from the dead is not easy but when you have enough passion you can do anything right? Thanks for the continued encouragement and wonderful comments REMARKABLE. Stay awesome! ;)
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9th Jan 2023 1:57am
Like 👍 wise 👌 😎 you as well keep on excelling in your craft 😉 and all you may do!! Peace ✌ and blessings always 🙏
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Re. Awakening my dead soul... (with Reading)
18th Jan 2023 2:52am
Re: Re. Awakening my dead soul... (with Reading)
18th Jan 2023 12:58pm
Hey there Brad, it makes me happy that you loved every word. I can definitely be very dark and beautiful. ;) I find cemeteries beautiful and peaceful and I like waking the dead too. ;) I used to live by this incredibly old one while in the UK growing up. Thank you so much for stopping by to have a read and listen, I really appreciate you sharing your thoughts with me.
Re: Re. Awakening my dead soul... (with Reading)
18th Jan 2023 4:05pm
My pleasure, I love all things dark. Even more so when there is a sense of beauty to it. I love old cemeteries, use to go to a few years back. It’s so peaceful to just sit there in silence and think. I do independent film. I would love to work on a video project for you if your ever interested.
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Re. Awakening my dead soul... (with Reading)
21st Jan 2023 7:13am
Incredible writing as always with you! :) You truly leave me in awe of your talent with every read of your work. You take things to the next level like no one else I have ever read and I have read on many boards and many books. Truly you are in on your level, your own unique place with creative writing. I would place you next to Poe perhaps even. Always a pleasure :)
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Re: Re. Awakening my dead soul... (with Reading)
21st Jan 2023 3:06pm
Well I adore that you think it's always incredible writing Michael. ;) And thank you for such a breathtaking compliment, being in awe; that really makes me so happy. Really everything you said is just so amazing that it's hard to reply properly. I love that you hold my writing in such high regard and can truly immerse yourself in the meanings of it. 'next to Poe' is just Wow! I am really speechless... And it's always a pleasure to here from you as well.