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vulnerability
I need you inside my vulnerability
within my sacred halls
perfectly scribed with poetry
are feelings of you, to keep
I cherish the dawning of our love
you know all of my sides
and still you choose to strive with me
bedevilment be damned I am you gentle woman
smiling like sunshine on your darkness
corrupted midnights
shadow your heart
you doubt my ghosts
I understand the red of it
weep for misunderstandings past
and come to me
I'm holding fast to desire
she has open the door to feelings
for in my grey days,
you shine a light home for me
deep inside your heart
Published 24th Dec 2022
Author's Note
Merry Christmas ❤️
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24th Dec 2022 3:05pm
24th Dec 2022 3:06pm
24th Dec 2022 4:02pm
As human beings we are all vulnerable from time to time. There's no escaping the fact that we hurt or fear something
that we believe we expose a weakness in us...until we realize that everyone of us possess such a quality.
Excellent.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
that we believe we expose a weakness in us...until we realize that everyone of us possess such a quality.
Excellent.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
24th Dec 2022 9:13pm
hello beautiful Kitty I believe that too this is about me exposing my softer side to someone and I'm unsure if you were here I got so mentally ill but this poet stuck by me even then it's beautiful to me thank you for love and insight here ❤️
24th Dec 2022 10:04pm
Anytime, crimsin. Just say the word if you need an ear to listen.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
29th Dec 2022 1:53am
That closing stanza is stunning, the light gives us hope and love knowing that no matter how grey the day, it's going to be ok.
Well done crimsin.
Well done crimsin.
