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going dark
when love leaves, it
is like murdering
the stars and moon
and wishes
what is the use of
looking up anymore
what is left to
see
and wishing is like
spitting into
an empty
grave
Published 21st Dec 2022
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21st Dec 2022 11:40pm
hello beautiful Kitty are you certain that love has left?
I mean with this level of despair it seems you miss this person
if you cut them off perhaps a piece of your soul went too... hugs ❤️
I mean with this level of despair it seems you miss this person
if you cut them off perhaps a piece of your soul went too... hugs ❤️
22nd Dec 2022 00:10am
I lost my soul a looooong time ago, my dear. This is merely the reality I live with everyday.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
22nd Dec 2022 00:41am
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22nd Dec 2022 6:09pm
That first stanza is savage and true. Everything that first aspired us goes dark.
Well done.
Well done.
22nd Dec 2022 9:24pm
It seem it does ( for me at least).
Thank you, wally. Much appreciated.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Thank you, wally. Much appreciated.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
