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How is not here
the question being the whole mu'phukin' picture... December 1987.(it was the 13th)
...then here come these greedy bitches with they kids while they niggas sit in the Acura sellin sweaters in California sun, in the mall to have their children see a figment of their parents imagination named santa somethin'. Lil' Mexican child takes his dog to the mall, walks to the candy store, while santa or whoever sits at the south door. spacious aisles lead to other stores or kiosk, but the dog is pregnant and niggas still sellin' nothin' out of the Acura.
Bullets come from the sky as a plane passes by , missing dog and the Mexican child, the nigga in the Acura stepped away from the car to find a dollar stuck tot hear ground: it eats the inside of the mall .
it eats the inside of the store that belongs to the man from Guam. The little girl from Orange county touches the white santas hand and he cries
Bullets stop inside the outside and they all gather in equal confusion inside the whole situation
Suddenly there is a path that unleashed in the growing want to this confusion.
#Suraef
...then here come these greedy bitches with they kids while they niggas sit in the Acura sellin sweaters in California sun, in the mall to have their children see a figment of their parents imagination named santa somethin'. Lil' Mexican child takes his dog to the mall, walks to the candy store, while santa or whoever sits at the south door. spacious aisles lead to other stores or kiosk, but the dog is pregnant and niggas still sellin' nothin' out of the Acura.
Bullets come from the sky as a plane passes by , missing dog and the Mexican child, the nigga in the Acura stepped away from the car to find a dollar stuck tot hear ground: it eats the inside of the mall .
it eats the inside of the store that belongs to the man from Guam. The little girl from Orange county touches the white santas hand and he cries
Bullets stop inside the outside and they all gather in equal confusion inside the whole situation
Suddenly there is a path that unleashed in the growing want to this confusion.
#Suraef
Published 20th Dec 2022
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23rd Mar 2024 5:55pm
The piece you've presented is evocative and seems to be exploring themes of disparity, consumerism, violence, and perhaps even the surreal nature of societal constructs like Christmas. The juxtaposition of the mundane (shopping mall, Santa Claus) with the chaotic and violent (bullets, pregnant dog, dollar eating the inside of the mall) creates a jarring effect that forces the reader to confront the darker undercurrents of our society.
The mention of different ethnicities and socioeconomic backgrounds adds layers to the narrative, hinting at issues of race, class, and immigration. The sudden shift from chaos to a path emerging suggests a potential turning point or resolution, though it's left open to interpretation.
Overall, it's a thought-provoking piece that challenges the reader to examine the complexities and contradictions of modern life.
The mention of different ethnicities and socioeconomic backgrounds adds layers to the narrative, hinting at issues of race, class, and immigration. The sudden shift from chaos to a path emerging suggests a potential turning point or resolution, though it's left open to interpretation.
Overall, it's a thought-provoking piece that challenges the reader to examine the complexities and contradictions of modern life.
