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Biting My Tongue
He hates my rhymes
And protests my schemes
Hese going to make me rip at the seams
And then my words like blood will stream
My words have clear meaning
Through my heart words are gleaming
All my words have to rhyme
If not I'll have committed a crime
I've fallen in that crack
I never want to look back
My rhymes will never go away
My words are always here to stay
It pains me to say
Ill try one anyway
Though Your un meshed words
Cut my ears like swords
And protests my schemes
Hese going to make me rip at the seams
And then my words like blood will stream
My words have clear meaning
Through my heart words are gleaming
All my words have to rhyme
If not I'll have committed a crime
I've fallen in that crack
I never want to look back
My rhymes will never go away
My words are always here to stay
It pains me to say
Ill try one anyway
Though Your un meshed words
Cut my ears like swords
Published 17th Dec 2022
Author's Note
Dear brother, Consequentialchaios it has begun.
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17th Dec 2022 3:22pm
18th Dec 2022 5:54pm
I contemplated my choice of words and made an edit. Thank you for insight.
18th Dec 2022 7:33am
18th Dec 2022 5:58pm
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Thank you for encouragement.
I will stay with my style and never venture off the path.
I'm ocd about writing a poem that rhymes.
Its very pleasing to my ear.
As for this poem in particular, it is the start of a dance between my brother and I. His name is in my authors note.
😘.
S
Thank you for encouragement.
I will stay with my style and never venture off the path.
I'm ocd about writing a poem that rhymes.
Its very pleasing to my ear.
As for this poem in particular, it is the start of a dance between my brother and I. His name is in my authors note.
😘.
S
