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Loves Traded Place
If today im dragged to hell
I suppose there my soul will dwell
I know my soul is Heaven bound...
But down here I've been found
I traded places with you this day
So no more darkness would go your way
I know God will have mercy on thee
And one day send for me
I suppose there my soul will dwell
I know my soul is Heaven bound...
But down here I've been found
I traded places with you this day
So no more darkness would go your way
I know God will have mercy on thee
And one day send for me
Published 16th Dec 2022
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17th Dec 2022 4:04am
Dear G,
Very cool analogy with trading places for someone else’s well being. Interesting concept and love the prayerful quality and rhyming. H🌷
Very cool analogy with trading places for someone else’s well being. Interesting concept and love the prayerful quality and rhyming. H🌷
22nd Dec 2022 4:55pm
Nice 👌 way to put it!! I am absolutely fascinated by your art in your craft!! Nice write ✍!! Please 🙏 keep on writing ✍ ok peace ✌ and blessings always 🙏
