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A Perfect Picture
I draw
And erase
I draw
Once again, erase
The image will never be perfect
My canvas is such, for it is a mirror
And erase
I draw
Once again, erase
The image will never be perfect
My canvas is such, for it is a mirror
Published 13th Dec 2022
Author's Note
A short, simple poem this time. I'm sure we have all felt like this at one point our lives.
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13th Dec 2022 4:51am
This is sublime, deep poetry, but just love whatever you see in the mirror. Kudos and keep expressing young poet.
13th Dec 2022 5:15am
I have learned to love my imperfections, because imperfections and individuality go hand in hand.
Thanks for the words of encouragement!
I shall continue to do so
Thanks for the words of encouragement!
I shall continue to do so
31st Dec 2022 8:27pm
You're one of my new favourite poets. You show such maturity and self-awareness for your age. You have real talent and a fantastic future.
31st Dec 2022 11:25pm
Why thank you! I did not expect that at all, seriously I'm very flattered. I might not have the years and experience of others, but I try my best.
I am truly for grateful for everyone on this sight!
I am truly for grateful for everyone on this sight!
