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Your Love
Your love was always
larger than my plans
You were an apprenticeship for
living on in your absence.
You knew long before me.
On stage or alone, your
performances were flawless
while I still struggle to
remember my lines.
larger than my plans
You were an apprenticeship for
living on in your absence.
You knew long before me.
On stage or alone, your
performances were flawless
while I still struggle to
remember my lines.
Published 12th Dec 2022
Author's Note
We can learn from loves, even the short-lived. This is a treasured photo of my husband and me shortly after we were married.
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12th Dec 2022 12:49pm
12th Dec 2022 2:14pm
You had room to give him his due. Favourite lines:
You were an apprenticeship for
living on in your absence.
"On stage" makes me wonder if you met through drama?
You were an apprenticeship for
living on in your absence.
"On stage" makes me wonder if you met through drama?
13th Dec 2022 2:29am
13th Dec 2022 4:13am
Nizana,
This is beautifully written. I was touched most by this passage,
"You were an apprenticeship for
living on in your absence."
Bravissima!
This is beautifully written. I was touched most by this passage,
"You were an apprenticeship for
living on in your absence."
Bravissima!
28th Dec 2022 00:35am
