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Cryptic Eyes
You find subtle magic in my eyes,
Mysterious attraction in my eyes,
You get mesmerized with my eyes,
Get captivated to my dreary eyes,
Check shattered dreams in my eyes,
Look at agonizing pain in my eyes,
Feel the aches of my attractive eyes.
See the cryptic reflections in my eyes.
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Mysterious attraction in my eyes,
You get mesmerized with my eyes,
Get captivated to my dreary eyes,
Check shattered dreams in my eyes,
Look at agonizing pain in my eyes,
Feel the aches of my attractive eyes.
See the cryptic reflections in my eyes.
*****
Published 11th Dec 2022
Author's Note
I wrote this poem when I was trying to cheer up a girl. She was sobbing and said few words of the last line of my poem. Those words echoes and wrote them and titled it EYE.
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13th Dec 2022 4:27pm
A cute poem wow lovely to read, super way to cheer a girl. Thumbs up for the fab poem.
14th Dec 2022 3:39pm
Hello Sweet Lunaah,
Thank you for taking time and reading my poems. We are here to make others happy. I try if I can make someone happy. I love you, sweet face.
Hugs,
KS
Thank you for taking time and reading my poems. We are here to make others happy. I try if I can make someone happy. I love you, sweet face.
Hugs,
KS
14th Dec 2022 4:44pm
Hey how can u luv me when u don't even know me.
I already have two men madly in love with me poet.
I already have two men madly in love with me poet.
15th Dec 2022 4:38am
Lunaah,
When I say I love you, it doesn't mean I want to get into your pants. I love because you are a being of the nature, you have beautiful heart, you feel, think, and express your ideas. You have positive energy. I love people who give me positive vibes.
When I love, I set you free to embrace the universe and let the world love you too. Please don't misunderstand me. I know you are from different culture like me. Wish you happy holidays.
Love and hugs,
KS
When I say I love you, it doesn't mean I want to get into your pants. I love because you are a being of the nature, you have beautiful heart, you feel, think, and express your ideas. You have positive energy. I love people who give me positive vibes.
When I love, I set you free to embrace the universe and let the world love you too. Please don't misunderstand me. I know you are from different culture like me. Wish you happy holidays.
Love and hugs,
KS
15th Dec 2022 4:56am
Oh now i get it, in your culture you can say ' i love u' to any woman just like that in a friendly way. In ours u can't esp if the hubby or admirer can see it.
No probs, regards and best wishes friend.
No probs, regards and best wishes friend.
15th Dec 2022 7:26am
19th Dec 2022 9:02pm
Verses dedicated to someone are certain to shed some light and make them feel better.
Nicely done.
Nicely done.
