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In Those Moments
In those moments I am filled with light.
Love flows past my edges
ever out and away from
me. Light spreads but
I am never
emptied.
Love flows past my edges
ever out and away from
me. Light spreads but
I am never
emptied.
Published 8th Dec 2022
Author's Note
My daughter's recent poem. Photo is shared by her as well. I love reading of her joy. I hope she guards her heart.
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8th Dec 2022 4:29pm
Your writing is interesting and exciting
I enjoyed reading
It's nice that you always feel hungry
Hungry and you have someone to feed your hunger
No matter how much he feeds you, you feel hungrier
Whatever you feed him, he remains hungry for you
I love this hunger
I enjoyed reading
It's nice that you always feel hungry
Hungry and you have someone to feed your hunger
No matter how much he feeds you, you feel hungrier
Whatever you feed him, he remains hungry for you
I love this hunger
8th Dec 2022 9:25pm
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- Edited 20th Dec 2022 8:45pm
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18th Dec 2022 1:17pm
