deepundergroundpoetry.com

W. H. Speaks.

Had you compared me 'to a summer's day,'          
as hot lightning bolts flashed from angry eye        
and sterner stuff than 'darling bud's of may'          
with thunder-claps roiling off tongue, I cried            
            
as your weak pen wrote me towards my grave            
and gave me over to other eyes and hand,            
passionless, hid, behind your black ink's shade            
and what beauty I owned now, ever dimmed,            
             
entombed in the bland coffin of your script            
eternally shrouded by your weak words,            
now, no one can give me a face which fits        
then, I might have struggled up, to be heard.            
             
You drew me impotent then, laid me low            
I'll sleep now, I forgave you long ago...
Written by Rew
Published | Edited 17th Mar 2023
Author's Note
G ap

All quotes are from Shakespeare's sonnet 18.
(except for one or two)
But, I'm sure you knew that, anyway.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 2 reading list entries 1
comments 2 reads 202
Commenting Preference: 
The author is looking for friendly feedback.

Latest Forum Discussions
POETRY
Today 1:38pm by Grace
POETRY
Today 1:30pm by ajay
POETRY
Today 1:18pm by ajay
SPEAKEASY
Today 11:59am by Ahavati
SPEAKEASY
Today 11:52am by JiltedJohnny
SPEAKEASY
Today 7:14am by JiltedJohnny