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A mess (222)
The newly weds never got
To eat their Eiffel Tower look-alike wedding cake
As it was destroyed-devoured
By a huge ape-looking mascot
Trying to claw its way to the top
But not quite getting there
And messing it up
With its feet stuck in a see
Of french vanilla sugar coated bricks.
To eat their Eiffel Tower look-alike wedding cake
As it was destroyed-devoured
By a huge ape-looking mascot
Trying to claw its way to the top
But not quite getting there
And messing it up
With its feet stuck in a see
Of french vanilla sugar coated bricks.
Published 6th Dec 2022
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6th Dec 2022 2:50pm
Hi Robert,
How's things your end of the world?
I really like this.
Cheeky and wry.
Gr8t!
Take care.
X
How's things your end of the world?
I really like this.
Cheeky and wry.
Gr8t!
Take care.
X
6th Dec 2022 2:53pm
Hello dear. Fine around here. You? Enough of Christmas music already? Kisses, Robert.
11th Dec 2022 11:15pm
12th Dec 2022 4:49pm
Somerememberance of that movie with the big gorilla atop the Empire State building.
24th Dec 2022 4:55pm
Now THAT is something I'd like to see... although, how big is this ape? And (more to the point) how big is the cake?! It would make for rather an amusing wedding reception. I'm pretty sure I'd grab and handful of the resulting mess and sample the cake anyway, but that's just me. Merry Christmas!
27th Dec 2022 2:18pm
YA.........a great time to pig-out on delicacies. Season's Greetings to you. Kisses, Robert.
27th Dec 2022 2:24pm
Currently working my way through a family-sized box of Celebrations. I haven't exercised for a month because of Covid, bronchitis and a horrendous battle with asthma. I'll sort myself out in January!!
