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Pulled To Her
Even from afar I can sense her beauty
shimmering outside
the confines of the rain
I am pulled to her
in an ever glowing attraction
changing rapidly in intensity
and fervor
but never fading away
I see her coming nearer
as red hues fill a waning sky
her silhouette glowing
taking a rightful place at my side
night takes hold as do i
embracing the pain
we both have left
breeding deep inside
shimmering outside
the confines of the rain
I am pulled to her
in an ever glowing attraction
changing rapidly in intensity
and fervor
but never fading away
I see her coming nearer
as red hues fill a waning sky
her silhouette glowing
taking a rightful place at my side
night takes hold as do i
embracing the pain
we both have left
breeding deep inside
Published 6th Dec 2022
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6th Dec 2022 2:50am
6th Dec 2022 5:10pm
8th Dec 2022 3:47pm
That attraction is irresistible isn't it?
That intensity of lust and desire.
A wet shirt showing signs of what's underneath.
Wet hair needing to be pulled, squeezed.
Beside you... As you take hold...
And the pain fades quickly.
Are perhaps it's just begun. ;)
That intensity of lust and desire.
A wet shirt showing signs of what's underneath.
Wet hair needing to be pulled, squeezed.
Beside you... As you take hold...
And the pain fades quickly.
Are perhaps it's just begun. ;)
8th Dec 2022 8:23pm
9th Dec 2022 3:20am
Hey Tim:)
This is intense to me. Being pulled towards someone or something out of
sheer attraction. No rope needed - just the magnetic field of two people.
Loved this!!
This is intense to me. Being pulled towards someone or something out of
sheer attraction. No rope needed - just the magnetic field of two people.
Loved this!!
9th Dec 2022 4:36am
Thanks amiga, some souls are pulled to stronger than others...must be the size of the magnet ;)
11th Dec 2022 5:10pm
An appealing poem expressing the magnetic attraction you feel for her. I like the beautiful word choice as well. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
11th Dec 2022 8:50pm
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11th Dec 2022 6:57pm
Sigh heartfelt
11th Dec 2022 8:50pm
14th Dec 2022 4:43pm
There's a beautiful magnetism in these words:
'Even from afar I can sense her beauty
shimmering outside
the confines of the rain'
They pull us in and we go willingly.
Thanks for an enjoyable read, Tim.
'Even from afar I can sense her beauty
shimmering outside
the confines of the rain'
They pull us in and we go willingly.
Thanks for an enjoyable read, Tim.
14th Dec 2022 11:56pm
