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Want
Body aching for touch
Needy
Heavy labored breathing
Horny
Lips tracing body
Foreplay
Tongue dances across lips
Orgasm
Deep sighs and moans
Satisfied
Needy
Heavy labored breathing
Horny
Lips tracing body
Foreplay
Tongue dances across lips
Orgasm
Deep sighs and moans
Satisfied
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Re. Want
2nd Dec 2022 7:16am
Hoi hoi
Lovely!
With the lights on; your lover loves to look into your eyes when it happens.
My guess.
The photo is in tune with the words, really lo=Ely!
Kind regards, Gus
Lovely!
With the lights on; your lover loves to look into your eyes when it happens.
My guess.
The photo is in tune with the words, really lo=Ely!
Kind regards, Gus
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Re: Re. Want
2nd Dec 2022 11:20am
There’s nothing like watching your lovers eyes while you satisfy every need and want. Thank you Gus for the read and comment. 💜💜💜
Re. Want
8th Dec 2022 3:26pm
Love the formatting eyes, it really emphasizes each part.
The lust and desire, foreplay, and orgasm... the satisfaction.
I love the build up and each line brought vivid sexy imagery.
'Deep sighs and moans' oh yeah, I am thoroughly distracted. ;)
The lust and desire, foreplay, and orgasm... the satisfaction.
I love the build up and each line brought vivid sexy imagery.
'Deep sighs and moans' oh yeah, I am thoroughly distracted. ;)
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Re: Re. Want
9th Dec 2022 00:37am
Thank up fir the RL and the comment Kristina. The comments means a lot coming from a great poetess. 💜💜💜
Re. Want
10th Apr 2023 00:29am
A wonderful erotic poem
I enjoy reading
We want
Two bodies grinding
We need
Difficulty breathing and profuse sweating
we horny
Lips follow the body and bite
we foreplay
The tongue dances on the lips and indulges
our Orgasm
Deep sighs and shrieks of moans in fits
satisfied together.
love and pease
MP
I enjoy reading
We want
Two bodies grinding
We need
Difficulty breathing and profuse sweating
we horny
Lips follow the body and bite
we foreplay
The tongue dances on the lips and indulges
our Orgasm
Deep sighs and shrieks of moans in fits
satisfied together.
love and pease
MP
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