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desire
alone in the madness I call to you
escape with me oh star man
made of dark matter and stardust
you crush my soul
I feel you to my core
a rush of feeling and take off
I'm in the atmosphere rushing off pheromones and adrenaline
rotating around you I try to get a hold of myself
dazed and confused I am am stunned by a stunner of a man
who captured my attention so effortlessly leaving me breathless and transfixed
mesmerized in the moment I watch you
with skilled precision you leave a mark
an imprint on my soul
so beautifully scarred
tortured just so
it is agony to touch you
and fatal to pull away
I linger in the shadows
awaiting your greed,
to meet me in the madness you know
Published 2nd Dec 2022
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2nd Dec 2022 4:50pm
I can always feel your desire deeply.
That lust for life, the passion.
The constant need attracts.
For the soul to be crushed.
Creating the most beautiful diamond.
What an incredible rush.
Pheromones and Adrenalin mix so well.
The gravity of the sun will always pull us.
But the gravity of a black hole is stronger...
So who is really pulling who?
And who is crushing you in the end.
And who is mesmerized by who...
I am mesmerized by you. ;)
Ah the precision of words...
Leaves an imprint on the soul.
We are all scarred and tortured.
In agony from the need...
Gravity of Darkness attracts...
The strongest pull.
Always meeting in the madness.
Another beautiful write Brenda.
Sorry I have not been around... life stuff. :(
That lust for life, the passion.
The constant need attracts.
For the soul to be crushed.
Creating the most beautiful diamond.
What an incredible rush.
Pheromones and Adrenalin mix so well.
The gravity of the sun will always pull us.
But the gravity of a black hole is stronger...
So who is really pulling who?
And who is crushing you in the end.
And who is mesmerized by who...
I am mesmerized by you. ;)
Ah the precision of words...
Leaves an imprint on the soul.
We are all scarred and tortured.
In agony from the need...
Gravity of Darkness attracts...
The strongest pull.
Always meeting in the madness.
Another beautiful write Brenda.
Sorry I have not been around... life stuff. :(
2nd Dec 2022 6:03pm
good morning beautiful Kristina I always love your reviews you are very passionate person and it comes across when you talk even just your presence here is felt deeply...you always leave me breathless not knowing what to say for some reason I am better expressing myself through poetry than communicating when I expressing myself to people I feel a little awkward you might not know it even if you met me in my day to day but it's true...your review of my poem is beautiful and speaks to be I love your analogy of a black hole... you're so right...there is a certain magic about you I find thrilling... there is a certain magic about me too this guy told me you're using your magic on me, you're seducing me...maybe I was...have beautiful day today Kristina and thank you graciously 💕
8th Dec 2022 4:40pm
Gotta appreciate the passion your express for this person, it's lovely and seductive. Lines like "rushing off pheromones and adrenaline" go into the biology of things just to remind us how our bodies react.
Great stuff.
Great stuff.
