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Mourning Glory

opened his eyes
yawned
stretched slowly

he looked at me
made a puzzled face
slowly teared up

said:
the problem is me
not you

In my head
the drums beat disconcertedly
the perfect soundtrack

I didn't open my eyes
I stood there listening to the voice
slowly disappearing

PAR
Written by PAR (PAULO ACACIO RAMOS)
Published
Author's Note
"The voice echoes ten thousand times and more."
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