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The last piece of my puzzle
Compulsion commencing
The thorn in my heart
pulling and taking
my world apart
Drowning damns me
into this hole
Suffocating
I am not whole
A piece parries
and hides away
The thing I yearn for
isn't mine to take
But without it
I am all alone
and true happiness
is a seed that won't grow
The thorn in my heart
pulling and taking
my world apart
Drowning damns me
into this hole
Suffocating
I am not whole
A piece parries
and hides away
The thing I yearn for
isn't mine to take
But without it
I am all alone
and true happiness
is a seed that won't grow
Published 1st Apr 2012
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1st Apr 2012 10:33pm
Amazing just isn't the correct term..but it's the best i've got right now.. I love this.. so many a times I have felt this way..
1st Apr 2012 10:35pm
Thanks and you said what I wanted to say about your Crown poem, I just couldn't put thoughts to words lol
1st Apr 2012 10:45pm
no problem..my brain isn't quite functioning correctly at this time, or else I would have had a better word..
1st Apr 2012 10:55pm
