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Orgasm
Suddenly I found myself
submerged in a cascade
of pleasure. Measured against
the timeline of eternity,
those few moments
outweighed all other time.
As we rode the cascading waters,
we knew it would come crashing
upon us, but when it did, all the
goodwill in the world widened to
drink us up completely.
submerged in a cascade
of pleasure. Measured against
the timeline of eternity,
those few moments
outweighed all other time.
As we rode the cascading waters,
we knew it would come crashing
upon us, but when it did, all the
goodwill in the world widened to
drink us up completely.
Published 19th Nov 2022
Author's Note
My daughter's poem about orgasm. I thought it was beautiful and am thankful that she celebrates the good in life.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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19th Nov 2022 3:36pm
The path of ecstasy is beautiful and exciting
It starts with a warm kiss, followed by a sensual physical foreplay
Bodies were intertwined in a conjoining and harmonious dance
A mouth here and a mouth there, one hand in a bend and the other hand rushing
Lips gobbling stick and lips sucking in the groove
Groaning spreads, breaths become weak, and bodies sweat
The two bodies trembling in the blink of an eye, voices resounding
He is orgasm
It starts with a warm kiss, followed by a sensual physical foreplay
Bodies were intertwined in a conjoining and harmonious dance
A mouth here and a mouth there, one hand in a bend and the other hand rushing
Lips gobbling stick and lips sucking in the groove
Groaning spreads, breaths become weak, and bodies sweat
The two bodies trembling in the blink of an eye, voices resounding
He is orgasm
20th Nov 2022 4:40pm
Following the complex sequence that leads to orgasm is amazing. What starts as a glance of the eye might end in so much more. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
19th Nov 2022 4:24pm
19th Nov 2022 4:30pm
19th Nov 2022 6:34pm
Poem and picture complement each other in a joint picture of ecstasy. Favourite phrase:
submerged in a cascade
of pleasure.
submerged in a cascade
of pleasure.
20th Nov 2022 2:32am
20th Nov 2022 6:19am
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- Edited 6th Dec 2022 00:45am
20th Nov 2022 6:21pm
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24th Nov 2022 3:03am
We've talked about it but she sees this site as her mamma's thing. I'm glad she's willing to share with me.
