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His Silhouette
The undertones of his shadows leave impressions
His confessions remain...
All his shadows-
Dark and bright- linger
During the brightness of the day,
The truth hinders,
And oh how I ache for it all to wither,
But it is until then,
His silhouette,
I try to forget
His confessions remain...
All his shadows-
Dark and bright- linger
During the brightness of the day,
The truth hinders,
And oh how I ache for it all to wither,
But it is until then,
His silhouette,
I try to forget
Published 18th Nov 2022
| Edited 20th Nov 2022
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18th Nov 2022 3:19am
It's hard to forget when true emotions were once involved, nice darkness in your style. Tight
18th Nov 2022 3:34am
18th Nov 2022 3:21am
Hiya.
Fourth line, "it (is) then" ?
This is a wonderful write. Solid throughout. And well written, that kept me engaged entirely. Very good write you have here. It's awesome.
Fourth line, "it (is) then" ?
This is a wonderful write. Solid throughout. And well written, that kept me engaged entirely. Very good write you have here. It's awesome.
18th Nov 2022 3:35am
19th Jan 2023 10:02pm
This is greatly written, you are a virtuous poet. Silhouettes do hold a strength as I have written of my wife and her silhouette. Again great job
