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immortal
beauty denies me entry into your darkness
I swallow my pride
telling you, but I love you
I'm not allowed inside your truth
I know you're there just out of reach
sacredness speaks in riddles
and lets me touch the surface sin
silently beholding me
you affect my day
our connection made
blood and soul
I hurt in the ache
falling into the bleak
I made my mind up I'm not turning back
you are within my soul
I feel you move
I know your next step before you do
back into the shadows
where Sunshine will greet you
but baby, it will still be me you're after
Published 13th Nov 2022
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14th Nov 2022 3:10am
I like the assurance that you wrote into this. Almost like their power is obvious and yours is understated,yet just as strong. Until the "boom" of you hits them.
Very cool write, and a great read!
Very cool write, and a great read!
20th Nov 2022 4:21am
"I'm not allowed inside your truth
I know you're there just out of reach
sacredness speaks in riddles
and lets me touch the surface sin"
It's as if the universe puts it out there for to come across this reflect on it.
Thank you for sharing.
I know you're there just out of reach
sacredness speaks in riddles
and lets me touch the surface sin"
It's as if the universe puts it out there for to come across this reflect on it.
Thank you for sharing.
20th Nov 2022 4:28am
