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When I feel fearless
I hate when I feel fearless
Because • it shows the sign
Neon flashing • CARELESS
Proves foolish • every time
A.R.M.
Because • it shows the sign
Neon flashing • CARELESS
Proves foolish • every time
A.R.M.
Published 10th Nov 2022
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12th Nov 2022 3:33am
Dear A,
While brief in content your poem is huge in meaningful message. I think there are many of us who can relate to this experience. Not a wasted word, very well executed. H🌷
While brief in content your poem is huge in meaningful message. I think there are many of us who can relate to this experience. Not a wasted word, very well executed. H🌷
31st Dec 2022 7:13am
25th Mar 2024 00:28am
I like the powerful and reflective approach with brevity, leaving us to wonder if the lesson is learned.
Nicely done.
Nicely done.
