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Lost girl
She is a girl
Who is lost in this world
She thought she knew how it worked
But that was a long time ago
Now is so deeply confused
She doesn't know what's right
And she has the feeling she does everything wrong
She still feels the old cuts
When her blood mixes with tears
She remembers those lost years
There were so many things left undone
And so many songs left unsung
Her mind is so warped and twisted
She tries to take pills
She will take razor blades, score deep into her skin
But nothing ever seems to help
She has lost everything
Her life has just fallen apart
Shes lost her soul
And even her heart
Her world just turns cold
And nobody is around
This is the one day that all she has lost is never found
Who is lost in this world
She thought she knew how it worked
But that was a long time ago
Now is so deeply confused
She doesn't know what's right
And she has the feeling she does everything wrong
She still feels the old cuts
When her blood mixes with tears
She remembers those lost years
There were so many things left undone
And so many songs left unsung
Her mind is so warped and twisted
She tries to take pills
She will take razor blades, score deep into her skin
But nothing ever seems to help
She has lost everything
Her life has just fallen apart
Shes lost her soul
And even her heart
Her world just turns cold
And nobody is around
This is the one day that all she has lost is never found
Published 31st Mar 2012
| Edited 1st Apr 2012
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She is a girl
Who is lost in this world
She thought she knew how it worked
But that was a long time ago
Now she's so deeply confused
She doesn't know what's right
And she feels she did everything wrong
She still feels the old cuts
when her blood mixed with tears
She remembers those lost years
There were so many things left undone
And so many songs left unsung
Her mind is so warped and twisted
She tries to take pills
She takes razor blades, score deep into skin
But nothing ever seems to help
She has lost everything
Her life has just fallen apart
Shes lost her soul
And even her heart
Her world just turns cold
And nobody is around
This is the one day that all is lost and was never found
hey, your poem was very good, and i liked it, but i tweaked a few things in the poem above, see what you think, let me know. :)
Who is lost in this world
She thought she knew how it worked
But that was a long time ago
Now she's so deeply confused
She doesn't know what's right
And she feels she did everything wrong
She still feels the old cuts
when her blood mixed with tears
She remembers those lost years
There were so many things left undone
And so many songs left unsung
Her mind is so warped and twisted
She tries to take pills
She takes razor blades, score deep into skin
But nothing ever seems to help
She has lost everything
Her life has just fallen apart
Shes lost her soul
And even her heart
Her world just turns cold
And nobody is around
This is the one day that all is lost and was never found
hey, your poem was very good, and i liked it, but i tweaked a few things in the poem above, see what you think, let me know. :)
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16th Apr 2012 1:55am
This was like a recap of my life. You wrote this in better words than i could ever imagine.
16th Apr 2012 2:02am
23rd Apr 2012 11:57pm
my friend recommended to read some of your poems.. amazing. just amazing
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11th Sep 2013 9:38pm
By all far out... This is my favorite poem
