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An Oblique Orb
There before me
Lived a thousand tales
A script aplenty
Of ne'er-do-wells
And i wondered
And drifted
And dreamed
And shifted
And thought
About this world
So small
Then contemplated
About it all
Then realised
A reality
Not so unique
That the reality
Of this world
So obliquely
Bleak.....
by Jemia
Lived a thousand tales
A script aplenty
Of ne'er-do-wells
And i wondered
And drifted
And dreamed
And shifted
And thought
About this world
So small
Then contemplated
About it all
Then realised
A reality
Not so unique
That the reality
Of this world
So obliquely
Bleak.....
by Jemia
Published 11th Oct 2022
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8th Nov 2022 4:04pm
I don’t know why but I love your brief interlude with “and” lines. This is offbeat, original and cool. Loved reading it.
8th Nov 2022 4:46pm
i often feel like a mad scientist of poetry, never quite sure if it'll work, but just follow my pen around the page, and see what the ink produces, leaky thoughts x:)
9th Nov 2022 4:46am
