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This Lunar Twilight
Let the evening pass
through rings of fire,
let our worlds
intertwine
in a kaleidoscope
of delirium,
the pulse of
our conjoined minds
giving birth
to liquid stars
flowing through
this lunar twilight.
through rings of fire,
let our worlds
intertwine
in a kaleidoscope
of delirium,
the pulse of
our conjoined minds
giving birth
to liquid stars
flowing through
this lunar twilight.
Published 10th Oct 2022
Author's Note
Just a fantasy!
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11th Oct 2022 00:49am
Wow Mun
This is so massive for being a short poem.
Great execution on words and style.
Also like how the words are spaced on the page.
Hope that makes sense.
This is so massive for being a short poem.
Great execution on words and style.
Also like how the words are spaced on the page.
Hope that makes sense.
11th Oct 2022 6:34am
Dear M,
I enjoyed the use of lunar metaphor in this poem. Your formatting is such it makes for a great flow while reading and the eloquence of the subject is very well done. Stellar write in every regard. H🌷
I enjoyed the use of lunar metaphor in this poem. Your formatting is such it makes for a great flow while reading and the eloquence of the subject is very well done. Stellar write in every regard. H🌷
13th Oct 2022 4:39pm
27th Oct 2022 3:24pm
The imagery of this Lunar Twilight is so beautiful.
I know passing through the rings of fire certainly gave me some images of what's going on there.
But that's extreme content. lol
Worlds intertwining, I love the holistic nature of coming together this portrays.
It's more than just sex. It's sharing yourself completely and that's when you can truly see this miraculous kaleidoscope of delirium.
The pulse of being conjoined... (mind and body)
That gives birth to liquid stays and the flowing that is unleashed by coming together. (so to speak ;))
I know passing through the rings of fire certainly gave me some images of what's going on there.
But that's extreme content. lol
Worlds intertwining, I love the holistic nature of coming together this portrays.
It's more than just sex. It's sharing yourself completely and that's when you can truly see this miraculous kaleidoscope of delirium.
The pulse of being conjoined... (mind and body)
That gives birth to liquid stays and the flowing that is unleashed by coming together. (so to speak ;))
27th Oct 2022 9:35pm
Ha! I hadn't even realized the full import of my words when I wrote this poem. Thanks for sharing your insightful take on it! I'm glad to have met you!
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