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Pears
Pull the trigger
it's a figure of speech
let me beseech you
really treat you
to something
I don't fully understand
it's a figure of speech
let me beseech you
really treat you
to something
I don't fully understand
Published 7th Oct 2022
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8th Oct 2022 9:22am
Dear SM,
I like the ambiguity in this. I didn’t really apply the love aspect in my initial read I kept substituting other things and really enjoyed the process. Engaging piece that morphs into many things for the reader. H🌷
I like the ambiguity in this. I didn’t really apply the love aspect in my initial read I kept substituting other things and really enjoyed the process. Engaging piece that morphs into many things for the reader. H🌷
8th Oct 2022 10:54pm
Thank you.
This one has the feeling of a false start for me, as if it almost disappears before I can even dive into it and I'm back at the start again trying to penetrate it a different way.
This one has the feeling of a false start for me, as if it almost disappears before I can even dive into it and I'm back at the start again trying to penetrate it a different way.
8th Oct 2022 3:54pm
That step into the unknown or not fully understood - which love can certainly be.
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