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Night Swim

Lit sandles on the wind
dancing in the sand
like candles
blowing out
then in

Your fingers stretching
from mine
as the tide catches
your fetching pride

everything's fine

yet the tingling warmth
your evaporating touch
says far too much

I breathe out
then in
Written by SeaMiser_MC (zzz)
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