non existence

Short, concise, and strangely beautiful. Like a punch in the face with a velvet cushion, if that metaphor makes sense. Unpretentious and true, so in that respect this is perfect poetry. The title was intriguing, as well.

i thought you'd dig the depressive nature of this one.. yeah the title.. i think about the void often.. it goes along with my obsession with death.. some say in death we all go to a heaven of our choice.. something we could understand and appreciate which is different for everyone.. like our understanding of god.. we all worship or choose not to worship in our own way even in the same religion everyone has their own specific opinions.. I saw Ggod once but he came in a form I could understand.. I have an aquantence who said he saw god as well.. but it was different from what I saw.. it came in a form he could understand and appreciate

Beautifully raw and honest. You spin intriguing circles, Nathan, always visceral yet darkly elegant.
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aw thanks so much honey.. "raw".. that is something I always strive for through my words..

you are just so amazing!

awww darlin.. thank you so much.. your words mean everything to me.. a writer is nothing if he's not read and appreciated.. so you're the one that makes me beautiful.. thank you