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HIS HOOK AND HER BAIT
Upon his north pointing hook
she was passionately took,
by haired triangle dangling,
her limbs around him tangling.
It was an opportune hook-up,
Orgasm left her shook up
when he'd got the earth moving
with his thrusts in her grooving.
she was passionately took,
by haired triangle dangling,
her limbs around him tangling.
It was an opportune hook-up,
Orgasm left her shook up
when he'd got the earth moving
with his thrusts in her grooving.
Published 17th Sep 2022
| Edited 18th Sep 2022
Author's Note
Exploring 'hook' as a euphemism.
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This ought to been titled, His Hook and Her Bait.. what an enticing poem, my wise poet...it has a nice flow to it.
18th Sep 2022 7:20am
18th Sep 2022 4:58pm
