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If I close my eyes
if I close
my eyes
I can feel you
upon my flesh
inside the depths
of my soul
between every inch
of my bones
I can feel you
in every breath
that fills my lungs
and in every beat
of my heart
my eyes
I can feel you
upon my flesh
inside the depths
of my soul
between every inch
of my bones
I can feel you
in every breath
that fills my lungs
and in every beat
of my heart
Published 2nd Sep 2022
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- Edited 20th Dec 2022 8:45pm
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2nd Sep 2022 7:29pm
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2nd Sep 2022 7:35pm
Thank you so very much. It's so nice to see you today.
Much love to you too dear poet
Much love to you too dear poet
2nd Sep 2022 7:44pm
Jay has taken the words out of my mouth.
I agree with him fully. Such a feeling it
must be to be loved in such an all
encompassing way.
Keith
I agree with him fully. Such a feeling it
must be to be loved in such an all
encompassing way.
Keith
3rd Sep 2022 1:57am
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Anonymous
- Edited 12th Aug 2024 3:45am
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4th Sep 2022 6:22pm
4th Sep 2022 5:38pm
(I don't get tired of looking at those legs)
As of late, I've noticed a calm admirable approach to your writing. Maybe it's always been there and I was slow to notice?
And I don't mean casual approach. More like a calm joy for what's in front of you. Be it a person or a sense of surroundings overall. It's a good ambience. And it makes reading your material promote that same sense of peace(?). It's a welcome feeling. And always good timing.
What a wonderful read for a sunday afternoon.
As of late, I've noticed a calm admirable approach to your writing. Maybe it's always been there and I was slow to notice?
And I don't mean casual approach. More like a calm joy for what's in front of you. Be it a person or a sense of surroundings overall. It's a good ambience. And it makes reading your material promote that same sense of peace(?). It's a welcome feeling. And always good timing.
What a wonderful read for a sunday afternoon.
4th Sep 2022 6:32pm
What a lovely comment. Perhaps, it's always been there in my writings, maybe not. Either way, I'm glad you find the ambiance welcoming. I guess with us all, there are so many sides to us, and though calming is one for me, the darkness comes more often than I'd like.
I appreciate your comment. I hope you are having a wonderful Sunday.
(I like my legs too)
xo
JC
I appreciate your comment. I hope you are having a wonderful Sunday.
(I like my legs too)
xo
JC
4th Sep 2022 7:14pm
5th Sep 2022 3:33am
