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Amber dreams
I drift away
in amber dreams
finding you
in the chapters
of my favorite poem
tracing every word
letter by letter
line by line
until the soft echos
of my beating heart
fill the pages
and you and I
are all that’s left
in amber dreams
finding you
in the chapters
of my favorite poem
tracing every word
letter by letter
line by line
until the soft echos
of my beating heart
fill the pages
and you and I
are all that’s left
Published 1st Sep 2022
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1st Sep 2022 3:35pm
1st Sep 2022 3:36pm
Keith -
Your comments are always so lovely. Thank you for your kindness, as always.
JC
Your comments are always so lovely. Thank you for your kindness, as always.
JC
Anonymous
1st Sep 2022 4:04pm
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1st Sep 2022 4:25pm
You are just so thoughtful, I love your words and honesty.
You're truly a gift
Much love
JC
You're truly a gift
Much love
JC
Anonymous
- Edited 20th Dec 2022 8:45pm
1st Sep 2022 4:18pm
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1st Sep 2022 4:25pm
1st Sep 2022 4:22pm
Cursed with a thought process that connects songs I enjoy to good poems, this write made me think of Glen Campbell's "Gentle on My Mind", and Paul McCartney's "Love Remains".
1st Sep 2022 4:26pm
I appreciate that about you because not only are your comments so nice, you give me more music to check out too.
Thank you
JC
Thank you
JC
1st Sep 2022 4:24pm
Dear JC,
Aaaaa! Well, that was beautiful. You seem to have cracked the code for creating the perfect balance of not too much and not too little. It still makes sense, it has a great meter with a lovely message. Give it up. What’s the recipe? (Wonderful write.😊)
H🌷
Aaaaa! Well, that was beautiful. You seem to have cracked the code for creating the perfect balance of not too much and not too little. It still makes sense, it has a great meter with a lovely message. Give it up. What’s the recipe? (Wonderful write.😊)
H🌷
1st Sep 2022 4:30pm
Dear H,
I'm always so thrilled to see you here. Your comments make my heart smile so much. So the recipe you wanted :-) well, it's a little insanity, with a hint of crazy and a lot of raw love.
I adore your words
JC -
I'm always so thrilled to see you here. Your comments make my heart smile so much. So the recipe you wanted :-) well, it's a little insanity, with a hint of crazy and a lot of raw love.
I adore your words
JC -
1st Sep 2022 7:53pm
2nd Sep 2022 1:00am
