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tech-no
ah technology
you tricky little bastard
not that you can be blamed
entirely by my misfortune
my eagerness to fill a blank page
when my mind starts
whirring
to suddenly get interrupted
that save button
too far from my reach
I left you to your
own devices
and lost
dammit
you tricky little bastard
not that you can be blamed
entirely by my misfortune
my eagerness to fill a blank page
when my mind starts
whirring
to suddenly get interrupted
that save button
too far from my reach
I left you to your
own devices
and lost
dammit
Published 2nd Sep 2022
Author's Note
Wouldn't it be wonderful if text could just be automatically saved! We've come so far in so many ways. Yet not as far as is acceptable ... lol. Just a little venting. I used to prewrite. I guess I should go back to it.
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3rd Sep 2022 00:12am
An experience of Technology not being neutral (it never is) -- it's designed to annoy humans, and exploit their weaknesses to addiction. Nevertheless, it's kinda useful -- sometimes. Nice cameo of tech-human relating.
Thank you Josh for the humor in your response. Perhaps what I was working on wasn't meant to be put down just yet .. instead it's floating about somewhere .. lol. I decided to let go and spend time in my garden, which never disappoints.
🦋
JeJe
🦋
JeJe
Heh, ain’t that a bitch! I’ve been burned before, and haven’t we all? This is a witty epilogue of sorts; the post-script reflection of a piece we’ll never read, lost to the ether.
(+ Josh’s comment makes me chuckle 🤭)
(+ Josh’s comment makes me chuckle 🤭)
4th Sep 2022 5:00pm
Thank you nightbirdblue for your sweet comments.. It's definitely not my first time getting burned .. lol. It happens.. perhaps the ether was hungry for something substantial.
🦋
JeJe
🦋
JeJe
