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Creatures at Dawn
She breaks me
Like daybreak on a cloudy day
Such dismay
A forray into madness
And jealousy
The bitch laid over
Forever smitten with hallowed things
Angry lust and bruised ego
Her will bent to the whims of one so lowly
Obscenity lingers to her skin
Bruised and broken over
She weeps beauty
And I cry
A cuck to innovation
She laughs coldly
And I cum
Swollen over with envy
A better wretch for a lesser whore
Like daybreak on a cloudy day
Such dismay
A forray into madness
And jealousy
The bitch laid over
Forever smitten with hallowed things
Angry lust and bruised ego
Her will bent to the whims of one so lowly
Obscenity lingers to her skin
Bruised and broken over
She weeps beauty
And I cry
A cuck to innovation
She laughs coldly
And I cum
Swollen over with envy
A better wretch for a lesser whore
Published 31st Aug 2022
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1st Sep 2022 00:15am
There is so much to see in this. I could definitely feel the abuse... Jealousy and control can definitely be a foray into madness. Smitten with defiling hallowed things. Angry lust can definitely be bruising when wielded as a weapon causing so many marks. Bending wills to avoid the damage, trying to play the part someone demands of you. Obscenities written on the skin. Broken and bruised, weeping but somehow still beautiful. Is this innovation? For some, yes... Sometimes the only resolution is to let them come inside. In that moment everything else disappears... but the pain will soon reappear needing to be pacified again through any means possible. I see other perspective on this one as well. Very meaningful, really enjoyed it.
