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Take My Heart
If you want it
It is most certainly
Yours if you
Request it
Take it
But please
Don't break it
That's all I
Ask of
Y o u
My love!
I have to pinch myself
Because it's
So very
Hard for me
To believe
Someone
Like you
Could be
So deeply
In love with
Me
My darling....
It is most certainly
Yours if you
Request it
Take it
But please
Don't break it
That's all I
Ask of
Y o u
My love!
I have to pinch myself
Because it's
So very
Hard for me
To believe
Someone
Like you
Could be
So deeply
In love with
Me
My darling....
Published 19th Aug 2022
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19th Aug 2022 9:28am
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Anonymous
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19th Aug 2022 10:45am
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19th Aug 2022 8:54pm
Dear F,
I love the genuine gift of giving your love to someone. It’s the best gift ever. The richness of the poem is in the voicing, you can hear the tentative generosity of wanting to give over completely but making sure the caveat is in place. Lovely piece. H🌷
I love the genuine gift of giving your love to someone. It’s the best gift ever. The richness of the poem is in the voicing, you can hear the tentative generosity of wanting to give over completely but making sure the caveat is in place. Lovely piece. H🌷
20th Aug 2022 3:54pm
Hoi hoi
The gift of giving someone your love like that, plus the gift of writing it down beautifully and sharing it with us.
I feel blessed for the part after the plus.
Keep ‘em coming please.
Kind regards, Gus
The gift of giving someone your love like that, plus the gift of writing it down beautifully and sharing it with us.
I feel blessed for the part after the plus.
Keep ‘em coming please.
Kind regards, Gus
Anonymous
- Edited 12th Aug 2024 3:45am
21st Aug 2022 10:21pm
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