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Inside those moments
Oh I would
love to live
inside those moments
after kissing you
where time
is quietly trapped
in the seconds between
dream and reality
where thoughts
are nothing more
or less
than what you believe
and everything
just feels infinite
and beautiful
love to live
inside those moments
after kissing you
where time
is quietly trapped
in the seconds between
dream and reality
where thoughts
are nothing more
or less
than what you believe
and everything
just feels infinite
and beautiful
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Re. Inside those moments
16th Aug 2022 7:08am
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16th Aug 2022 2:45pm
Re. Inside those moments
16th Aug 2022 10:30am
Dear JC,
I enjoyed the suspension of time and space in this poem. I loved the gentle sensation of fantasy (for me) and thoughtful reflection of just such a situation. Lovely piece. H🌷
I enjoyed the suspension of time and space in this poem. I loved the gentle sensation of fantasy (for me) and thoughtful reflection of just such a situation. Lovely piece. H🌷
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Re: Re. Inside those moments
16th Aug 2022 2:46pm
H,
Your comments are always so lovely. Thank you so much for your kind words.
Always,
JC
Your comments are always so lovely. Thank you so much for your kind words.
Always,
JC
Re. Inside those moments
16th Aug 2022 10:32am
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16th Aug 2022 2:46pm
Re. Inside those moments
16th Aug 2022 11:15am
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16th Aug 2022 2:47pm
Re. Inside those moments
Truly lovely, I’m sure we all can relate to a moment that we wished could have lasted forever or a time that seemed so perfect.
It is reality and it’s struggles that makes those moments so cherished.
Beautiful work dear poetess
~NE~
It is reality and it’s struggles that makes those moments so cherished.
Beautiful work dear poetess
~NE~
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Re: Re. Inside those moments
16th Aug 2022 2:47pm
Re. Inside those moments
Romance and emotion in motion...
Motionless moments, motionless sweetness.
This handful of verses is enough.
... 👍
Motionless moments, motionless sweetness.
This handful of verses is enough.
... 👍
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16th Aug 2022 4:11pm
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17th Aug 2022 3:38pm
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16th Aug 2022 11:24pm
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Re: Re. Inside those moments
17th Aug 2022 00:22am
Re. Inside those moments
17th Aug 2022 3:38am
Short enough to inscript on a medallion. Worthy enough for them to wear it so close to their heart.
This is a wonderful write.
This is a wonderful write.
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17th Aug 2022 11:51am