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Such A Night
Empire Stadium
Vancouver, BC, Canada
August 31, 1957
During our second set,
and only four songs in
the Colonel gives us the order
to bring the show to an end
Maybe closing with “Jailhouse Rock”
didn't settle the crowd
growing out of control
- unpredictable and loud
Getting safely out
poses a bit of a problem
I don’t want to miss my meet
with the fan club President
or it might leave me quite solemn
It seems only fair
that I show my appreciation
that they bring us great fans
all across this wide nation
We have to think fast
so we develop a ruse,
we slip my known gold jacket
on someone from the crew
I stay back at the stadium
while they think I have left
and we clear out a room
so I can honour my debt
And man, I must say
she is certainly a sight
with dark, swirling curls;
a total buxom delight
Of course,
I have left them wanting much more
and she voices her displeasure
that she only heard four
“I’d better make it up”,
I cleverly quip
And I can see
her quite anxiously
working on that lower lip
I move in a bit closer
And she quickly pulls me in
tight to her goodies
with a mischievous grin
She is one of the first,
to have nothing under skirt,
She's got that hunk just a growing
and this libido straight to work
I take those nice curves
Into my tender hands
and desire hits the pitch
to navigate promised land
I catch her enjoyment
In breath and her eyes
and the dampest enticement
between the smoothest of thighs
I drop to my knees
there should be no time to waste,
my devoted disciple
gives this pout a sweet taste
I lap and lick at my gift
so welcoming primed,
treating my tongue
In and outside of the lines
She yanks at my pants
of iconic gold,
and her firm hungry grip
puts me into the chokehold
Turning the tables - oh lord -
the feel of her mouth,
takes me to such places
I’ve never felt back down south
Between decadent slurps
I hear a “hail to the king”
Man, this burn of such loving
is such a sensual thing
I often fondly remember
how she’s opened that door
I’ve found a new way of signing
And I am hoping for much more.
#ElvisPresleyRomaticWeek🎁
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7kgm-vppxOY
Vancouver, BC, Canada
August 31, 1957
During our second set,
and only four songs in
the Colonel gives us the order
to bring the show to an end
Maybe closing with “Jailhouse Rock”
didn't settle the crowd
growing out of control
- unpredictable and loud
Getting safely out
poses a bit of a problem
I don’t want to miss my meet
with the fan club President
or it might leave me quite solemn
It seems only fair
that I show my appreciation
that they bring us great fans
all across this wide nation
We have to think fast
so we develop a ruse,
we slip my known gold jacket
on someone from the crew
I stay back at the stadium
while they think I have left
and we clear out a room
so I can honour my debt
And man, I must say
she is certainly a sight
with dark, swirling curls;
a total buxom delight
Of course,
I have left them wanting much more
and she voices her displeasure
that she only heard four
“I’d better make it up”,
I cleverly quip
And I can see
her quite anxiously
working on that lower lip
I move in a bit closer
And she quickly pulls me in
tight to her goodies
with a mischievous grin
She is one of the first,
to have nothing under skirt,
She's got that hunk just a growing
and this libido straight to work
I take those nice curves
Into my tender hands
and desire hits the pitch
to navigate promised land
I catch her enjoyment
In breath and her eyes
and the dampest enticement
between the smoothest of thighs
I drop to my knees
there should be no time to waste,
my devoted disciple
gives this pout a sweet taste
I lap and lick at my gift
so welcoming primed,
treating my tongue
In and outside of the lines
She yanks at my pants
of iconic gold,
and her firm hungry grip
puts me into the chokehold
Turning the tables - oh lord -
the feel of her mouth,
takes me to such places
I’ve never felt back down south
Between decadent slurps
I hear a “hail to the king”
Man, this burn of such loving
is such a sensual thing
I often fondly remember
how she’s opened that door
I’ve found a new way of signing
And I am hoping for much more.
#ElvisPresleyRomaticWeek🎁
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7kgm-vppxOY
Published 14th Aug 2022
Author's Note
The basis of this narrative is true. These were the circumstances surrounding the last time Elvis performed in Canada, but I have taken liberties with the facts after the gold jacket has been switched and what happens at the stadium afterward is all fiction.
This is a late entry for the celebration of the Elvis Week challenge hosted by SKC for fans of the the late icon.
This is a late entry for the celebration of the Elvis Week challenge hosted by SKC for fans of the the late icon.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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14th Aug 2022 6:48pm
Mm... how sweet it is, my tender poet, and you even serenaded us poetesses with your own special rendition of Jailhouse Rock in the afterthought, and other enticing mental, yet captivating illusions in the midst of carnal pleasure.
I do admire that you have been on this journey with me, and that is what I like about you as a friend, and as a tender poet; you have always, arose to my beautiful moments in time, and to give credence to one of my all-time favorite Rock-In-Roll idols is so special to me beyond what words could ever convey.
I thank you sincerely for this musing, my love and just for being you.
'Such A Night'...I liked the video it blended perfectly with your ponder.
Have a blessed Sunday and a rewarding upcoming week going forward...🍯
#ElvisPresleyRomaticWeek🎁
I do admire that you have been on this journey with me, and that is what I like about you as a friend, and as a tender poet; you have always, arose to my beautiful moments in time, and to give credence to one of my all-time favorite Rock-In-Roll idols is so special to me beyond what words could ever convey.
I thank you sincerely for this musing, my love and just for being you.
'Such A Night'...I liked the video it blended perfectly with your ponder.
Have a blessed Sunday and a rewarding upcoming week going forward...🍯
#ElvisPresleyRomaticWeek🎁
15th Aug 2022 1:01am
Thank you for enjoying my historical rendition of that moment in time and allowing me to take my own liberties with it in my own special way. It was a fun challenge to participate in, given my reverence for the King.
Although the song wasn't released until 1960, it seemed a fitting number to include and led me to think that it might be a fond recollection in his mind of such a night. ;)
Although the song wasn't released until 1960, it seemed a fitting number to include and led me to think that it might be a fond recollection in his mind of such a night. ;)
17th Aug 2022 6:03am
